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Host family Brief

Frage: Host family Brief
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Hallo liebe Leute,

wir haben gerade die AUfgabe, einen Brief an eine eventuelle künftige GAstfamilie zu schreiben und brauche dringend jemanden, der meinen Brief korrektur liest.

Hier der erste Teil:

Dear host family

my name is XX and I am XX years old living in my hometown XX a town with approximately 100.000 inhabitants. I am very glad to live here because of the beauty of the city centre, the great green places you can visit and the great cultural offers. ‘We’ that means my mum, her husband and I, live in a generous flat near the city centre. Due to ‘XX’ (our dog) and ‘XX’ (our cat) you can be sure to be busy at every time – which is no problem because the fun with them overweighs in fact.  Also living in XX is one of my grandparents. It got a kind of familiar tradition to visit them on Sundays, drinking some coffee and talking about the week. I always enjoy these days very much which give me the chance to relax on the last day of the week. To my grandfather I have a special connection. He might be one of the wisest men I know and this is why I like to talk to him a lot. Otherwise he makes me very fond of baking and cooking as well. During the years I’ve learned a lot of him in the matter of what is good food and in creating varies meals. To the disadvantage of my mother: Due to it the kitchen is occupied a lot of times. My father isn’t living in XX but even so we stay in contact. Either we’re phoning each other or he visits me. So I see both of my parents regularly.
At the moment I’m very requested due to my A-Level-exam which I’m going through in my grammar school called ‘XX’. My academic skills are in general good, the only problem is the good old mathematics on which I have to pay attention to. However I’m not as bad in it to disregard my greatest hobby which is the theater. For two years now I’m playing and watching theater as often as I can. For me it’s the best thing that could ever have happened to me. Through the theater I’ve met many new and open-minded people and got in contact with a lot of new possibilities. I am really proud to get to know so many nice and very funny friends there with whom I can have a lot of fun. By now I’ve acted in three plays, the last one was of one of the famous writers in Germany ‘Friedrich Schiller’ and is called ‘the Robbers’. At the moment I don’t act anymore because I want to know something about the creation of a play itself. This is why a friend and I are leading a group of adolescents in our age. Together we try to create an own play and to teach acting. That’s a really interesting work which makes a lot of fun and welds all members together. So if I am not doing anything that has to do with theater, I really love to create evenings with my friends. Often we invite each other at any occasion and then cook together.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 08.03.2012 - 22:40


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Antwort von BiigJoe (ehem. Mitglied) | 09.03.2012 - 00:20
Zitat:
my name is XX and I am XX years old living in my hometown XX a town (...)

live

Ich glaube, dass du "that means" weglassen kannst.
We, my mum, her husband and I, live in (...)sieht ein wenig komisch aus aber müsste so richtig sein :)


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Also living in XX is one of my grandparents.

One of my grandparents live in XX, too.
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(...) know and this is why I like to talk to him a lot.


and this is the reason why I ... oder and that is why I ..

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However I’m not as bad in it to disregard my greatest hobby which is the theater.

ohne which

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For two years now I’m playing and watching theater as often as I can.

since || since: Zeitpunkt for: Zeitraum ||

Zitat:
Often we invite each other at any occasion and then cook together.

to cook together

Hoffe konnte dir weiterhelfen. Ich bin auch nicht perfekt, also ich hab getan was ich konnte. :)

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Antwort von BiigJoe (ehem. Mitglied) | 09.03.2012 - 00:22
Tut mir leid! Das mit which habe ich falsch gelesen .. Alles richtig :)


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Antwort von Haloumi (ehem. Mitglied) | 09.03.2012 - 14:42
Vielen lieben Dank!
Ich würde dir ja auch gern mal helfen, wenn du Probleme hast ^^
zum Beispiel in Deutsch oder so was wie Sozi... ;)

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