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Many people in the west buy clothes made by poor people in development countries and feel bad about it, because they think the workers are paid bad but in fact they get more than teachers in Cambodia get paid.
It’s enough for them, but they have more family at their home village, which are mostly 6 to 15 people, and they also live from this wage. Some people don’t buy the jeans that are Made in Cambodia because they don’t think worker’s treated fairly but the factory is monitored by an international organizations so it make sure in those factory’s is no child labor which was the reason the company the Jeans are made for had bad press and many companies left Cambodia so a lot of people had no job because the factories closed .By now the industry problems are corrected with the help of the International Labor Organization and workers are happy to have this jobs even if it’s far away from their home village. We have to see that in developing countries the work at this sweetshops, even if we think it’s under unfair conditions, is the key to have a better life for the worker.

Danke