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Many people in the west buy clothes made by poor people in development countries and feel bad about it, because they think the workers are paid bad but in fact they get more than teachers in Cambodia get paid.
It’s enough for them, but they have more family at their home village, which are mostly 6 to 15 people, and they also live from this wage. Some people don’t buy the jeans that are Made in Cambodia because they don’t think worker’s treated fairly but the factory is monitored by an international organizations so it make sure in those factory’s is no child labor which was the reason the company the Jeans are made for had bad press and many companies left Cambodia so a lot of people had no job because the factories closed .By now the industry problems are corrected with the help of the International Labor Organization and workers are happy to have this jobs even if it’s far away from their home village. We have to see that in developing countries the work at this sweetshops, even if we think it’s under unfair conditions, is the key to have a better life for the worker.

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Frage von zicke616161 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 07.09.2011 - 16:30


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Antwort von zicke616161 (ehem. Mitglied) | 07.09.2011 - 19:45

...keiner?
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Antwort von Senkura (ehem. Mitglied) | 07.09.2011 - 20:32
Many people in the west buy clothes made/produced by poor people in development countries and feel bad about it, because they think that the underpaid workers are badly paid but in fact they get more than teachers in Cambodia. It’s enough for them, but they have more family members at their home village, roughly 6 to 15 members, and they also live from this wage. Some people for instance do not "ist in neutralen Texten besser als don`t" buy the jeans that were made/produced in Cambodia, because they think that the underpaid workers are not treated fairly but the factory is monitored by an "an bezieht sich auf eins, meinst du damit mehrere Firmen, wenn ja, dann muss an weg" international organization to make sure that the factories do not conduct child labor. This, however, creates pressure/press oder bad reputation and the consequence is that companies leave for instance Cambodia, which affect the underpaid workers and most of them end up unemployed. By now the issues of the industries are being fixed with the support of the International Labor Organization. Besides the workers are happy to have at least a job even if it`s far away from their home village.

"We have to see that in developing countries the work at this sweetshops", was willst du damit sagen? Sweetshops?

Even if the working conditions are insufficient, it`s still a key to have a better life.

Du musst versuchen, mehr connectives zu verwenden, sonst ist es ganz ok.

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