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hallo leute, ich muss in der nächsten englisch arbeit einen film review schreiben... mein ihr der folgende text ist gut?

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My movie review is about "Mit dir an meiner Seite". It is a movie by Nicholas Sparks with a running time of 107 minutes.
Veronica "Ronnie" (Miley Cyrus) is the protagonist of the movie. ?The score "when i look at you" is also from Miley? Veronica is an angry, rebellious seventeen year old teenager. She has been enstranging from her parents since their divorce. She is
accepted by a prestigious music school, but she refuses visiting it. With her father Steve, who taught her to play the piano, she doesn`t speak, until her mother Kim sends Ronnie and her brother Jonah to their father during the summer holidays.
But through their common love for music, Ronnie and her father slowly find back together. During the holidays she falls in Love with Ronah. They are so happy, but one day they fight and ronnie splits up.
Later, Ronnie finds out,that her father is very ill and will die the next week. When the mother Kim comes and picks up Veronica and her brother,Veronica stays with her father.
One evening she plays piano for him. Then she sees her father has died in the deck chair. What will happen now? Will Ronnie come back to Jonah? What will happen with her Family ?
Find it out yourself. I like this movie very much, because it shows the teenager situation very well. But this movie is so sad,that when i watched this film, all people in the cinema cried .Watch this film,you will like it
Frage von polat | am 23.05.2014 - 14:36


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Antwort von LsD | 23.05.2014 - 20:35
My movie review is about "Mit dir an meiner Seite". It is a movie by Nicholas Sparks with a running time of 107 minutes.
Veronica "Ronnie" (Miley Cyrus) is the protagonist of the movie. ?The soundtrack "when i look at you" is also from Miley?. Veronica is an angry,
rebellious seventeen year old teenager. She has been enstranging from her parents since their divorce. She is
accepted at a prestigious music school, but she refuses to go there. She doesn`t speak with her father Steve, who taught her to play the piano, she doesn`t speak, until her mother Kim sends Ronnie and her brother Jonah to their father during the summer holidays.
But through their common love for music, Ronnie and her father slowly find back together. During the holidays she falls in Love with Ronah. They are so happy, but one day they fight and ronnie breaks up.
Later, Ronnie finds out,that her father is very ill and will die the next week. When the mother Kim comes and picks up Veronica and her brother,Veronica stays with her father.
One evening she plays piano for him. Then she sees her father has died in the deck chair. What will happen now? Will Ronnie come back to Jonah? What will happen with her Family ?
Find it out yourself. I like this movie very much, because it shows the situation of teenagers situation very well. But this movie is so sad, that when i watched this film, all people in the cinema cried. Watch this film, you will like it.

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Antwort von haithabu | 23.05.2014 - 21:39
Zitat:
My movie review is about "Mit dir an meiner Seite". It is a movie by Nicholas Sparks with a running time of 107 minutes.
Veronica "Ronnie" (Miley Cyrus) is the protagonist of the movie. ?The soundtrack "when I look at you" is also from Miley?. Veronica is an angry, rebellious seventeen year old teenager. She has become estranged from her parents since their divorce. She has been
accepted at a prestigious music school, but she refuses to go there. She doesn`t speak with her father Steve, who has taught her to play the piano, she doesn`t speak, until her mother Kim sends Ronnie and her brother Jonah to their father during the summer holidays.
But through their common love for music, Ronnie and her father slowly find back together. During the holidays she falls in love with Ronah. They are so happy, but one day they fight and Ronnie breaks up.
Later, Ronnie finds out  [kein Komma] that her father is very ill and will die the following  week. When the mother Kim  comes and picks up Veronica and her brother,Veronica stays with her father.
One evening she  plays  the piano for him. Then she sees that her father has died in the deck chair. What will happen then? Will Ronnie come back to Jonah? What will happen with her family ?
Find it out yourself. I like this movie very much, because it shows the situation of teenagers situation very well. But this movie is so sad, that when I watched this film, all people in the cinema cried. Watch this film, you will like it.
 There have been some minor corrections which I have marked "fat"; thanks to our boss LsD for having done the first corrections.

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