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okaii ich versuchs >.<

also ich habe schon mal geschrieben : The reading of Tendai Huchu was about himself and his book "the Hairdresser of Harare" at the "Berliner Festspiele".

Natürlich wurde der Auto erstmal ausgefragt, wie sein leben verlief und was er in der zukunft noch machen möchte. Danach hat er einen Chapter aus seinem buch gelesen und dann konnten wir Schüler ihm fragen stellen.

Könnte einer mal nachschauen ob das alles richtig ist, Satzaufbau und Grammatik ? Danke im Vorraus :D

The reading of Tendai Huchu was about himself and his book "The Hairdresser of Harare". It was held at the "Berliner Feststpiele". His debut novel "The Hairdresser of Harare" ist about the homosexuality, which is against the law in Zimbabwe.

Ate the reading, Tendai Huchu talked about himselfs first. He told us about his family, his school education and his writing career.
Tendai Huchu told us that his book was published in 2010 and is about the homosexual that are not tolerated in africa. Vimbai, the protagonist in his book is a hairdresser in Harare and her life begins to changer after Dumisani enters into her life. Dumisani, also known as Dumi, is a hairdresser, too but he is a homosexual.
Tendai Huchu told it in a refreshing ton, what it feels like to live in harare even though there are current problems in improvished countries. The reading part shows a story of two young people who found their place in life.

so das ist jetzt erstmal alles. Bin total unsicher weil sich das mit Dumisani komisch anhört.
muss nur noch meine Opinion schreiben dann bin ich fertig :)