Ayub Khan-Din - East is east: Review Nachverbesserung!

Ich musste aufgrund der schlechten Note mein Review noch einmal bearbeiten, kann das bitte jemand durchlesen und meine Fehler berichtigen?

Neuer Versuch:

I want to write a review about the film East is East. At first I tell you two positive aspects. The scene in which the mother Ella Khan protects her children, she is a great mother and is always there for her children. Another scene which I like is while the children get together and protect their mother. We are able to see the cohesion of the family members.
Now I want to enumerate why I don´t like the film. At first I want to make clear that not every Muslim reacts like the father George Khan. Of course I´m against his behaviour and the violent scenes in this film. I´m sure that nobody laughs about it, on the contrary I am thoughtful and sad about this scenes. In my opinion shows East is East the religion to be a Muslim as a religion which includes violence and insults. The audience get the feeling what the father sais is a law nobody can say anything especially the woman have not to say. Another scene which I don´t like is with the arranged marriage. Yes it´s right that for long time ago arranged marriage was a tradicion but today you are able to find your real love alone.
All in all I dislike the film because of the bad representation of the religion. I also think that everyone can criticise every religion but not in this way. The film doesn´t display the positive sides of to be a Muslim. At last I want to make clear that not every man hits his wife or his children in particular not every Muslim-
Now I want to explain my opinion about the actors and the film teqniques. The actors play very realistic, I like it. The director used always the right music while the scene, for example the beginning scene it was a cheerful misic while the ceremony. The different shots makes the film more interesing and we are able to empathize with the actor and the situation.

Zitat:
I have written a review about the film "East is East".

At first I want to point out two positive aspects.
There are two scenes that are really touching: The scene
when [---]Ella Khan, the mother, protects her children. Here it becomes evident that she is a great mother who does her upmost for her children. The other scene which I like is, shows the children coming together [---] protecting their mother. Here we are shown the
close bond between the family members.

Secondly I now want to point out reasons why I don´t like the film.

At first I want to make clear [---] that not every Muslim reacts like George Khan, the father. Of course, I disapprove of his behaviour and the violent scenes in this film. I´m sure that nobody laughs about them, on the contrary.
I am thoughtful and sad about these scenes. In my opinion "East is East" shows the religion of being a Muslim as a religion which includes violence and insults. The audience gets the feeling that everything [---] the father says is a law. Nobody else has much to say [---], especially the women do not have to say anything. Another scene[---] which I don´t like is [---] the arranged marriage. Yes, it´s right that for long time [---] arranged marriages were [---] tradition, but today you are able to find your real love by yourself.
All in all, I dislike the film, because of the bad
presentation of [---] religion. I also think [---] that everyone can criticise every religion, but not in this way. The film doesn´t display the positive sides of being a Muslim. At last I want to make clear [---] that not every man beats his wife or his children in particular. And not every Muslim does it.

Now I want to explain my opinion about the actors and the film technology.
The actors play very realistically, I liked it. The director always used the right music in each [---] scene. For example, at the beginning scene a cheerful music
was chosen during the ceremony. The different shots make the film more interesting and we are able to sympathize with the actor and the situation.

Ich hoffe, ich konnte etwas helfen; beachte das Zeichen "[---]" bedeutet, dass ich hier etwas gestrichen habe - und sei es auch nur das blöde Komma vor "that".

Ich bin bei meiner Korrektur von der leider etwas unvollständigen Korrektur von "Anonym" ausgegangen.