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Ayub Khan-Din - East is east: Review Nachverbesserung!

Frage: Ayub Khan-Din - East is east: Review Nachverbesserung!
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Hallo :) ich sollte ein review über den Film east is east schreiben. Meine Aufgaben lauten

1 Decide whether you want to recommend the film or not
2 Choose oppropriate vocabulary eg critical, ironic, sarcastic, enthusiastic
3 Think of a good introduction it sholud arouse the inerest of the reader and not just consist of the film´s title and director
4 End your review with a conlusion that fits the message you have been conveying throughhout the review

Ich wäre sehr dankbar wenn ihr meine Fehler berichtigt, etwas ergänzt und eine gute Einleitung empfehlen würdet, weil eine bessere fällt mir nicht ein.

Ich bedanke mich jetzt schon für die Mühe!

I would like to write a review about the film East is East.
I want to start with two positive aspects. The first scene which I prefere is as the mother Ella Khan protects her children, she is a great mother and is always for the children there. The second scene which I like is as the children get together and protect their mother.
Now I explain why I don´t like the film, there are many reasons. At first I want to make clear that not every Muslim reacts like George Khan. I critizes the violent scenes and the insults because I don´t think that this is funny. The film shows the religion to be a Muslem as bad. An other important reason why I don´t like this film is the scene with the arranged marriage. Yes it´s right that for long time ago it happend and today there still exsists but not every Muslem country is so.
All in all I want to say that I don´t like this film. Of course they can criticise the Muslem as a religion but not in this way. I want to make clear that not every Man hit his wife and of course not every Muslem! Our religion is opposed, and I also think that everyone can choose his/her religion itself nobody can be forced to have a religion or married someone.


[quote]Ich musste aufgrund der schlechten Note mein Review noch einmal bearbeiten, kann das bitte jemand durchlesen und meine Fehler berichtigen?

[b]===>> siehe weitern Post vom 12.02.2013 weiter unten! !
Frage von yy92 | am 21.01.2013 - 15:39


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Antwort von cleosulz | 23.01.2013 - 18:07
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Antwort von yy92 | 12.02.2013 - 18:08
Ich musste aufgrund der schlechten Note mein Review noch einmal bearbeiten, kann das bitte jemand durchlesen und meine Fehler berichtigen?

Neuer Versuch:

I want to write a review about the film East is East. At first I tell you two positive aspects. The scene in which the mother Ella Khan protects her children, she is a great mother and is always there for her children. Another scene which I like is while the children get together and protect their mother. We are able to see the cohesion of the family members.
Now I want to enumerate why I don´t like the film. At first I want to make clear that not every Muslim reacts like the father George Khan. Of course I´m against his behaviour and the violent scenes in this film. I´m sure that nobody laughs about it, on the contrary I am thoughtful and sad about this scenes. In my opinion shows East is East the religion to be a Muslim as a religion which includes violence and insults. The audience get the feeling what the father sais is a law nobody can say anything especially the woman have not to say. Another scene which I don´t like is with the arranged marriage. Yes it´s right that for long time ago arranged marriage was a tradicion but today you are able to find your real love alone.
All in all I dislike the film because of the bad representation of the religion. I also think that everyone can criticise every religion but not in this way. The film doesn´t display the positive sides of to be a Muslim. At last I want to make clear that not every man hits his wife or his children in particular not every Muslim-
Now I want to explain my opinion about the actors and the film teqniques. The actors play very realistic, I like it. The director used always the right music while the scene, for example the beginning scene it was a cheerful misic while the ceremony. The different shots makes the film more interesing and we are able to empathize with the actor and the situation.

 
Antwort von ANONYM | 13.02.2013 - 09:07
Kann es jemand besser?

Zitat:
I want to write a review about the film "East is East".
At first I tell you two positive aspects. The scene in which the mother Ella Khan protects her children. She is a great mother and she is always to by there for her children. Another scene which I like is, while the children get together and protect their mother. We are able to see the cohesion of the family members.
Now I want to enumerate why I don´t like the film.
At first I want to make clear, that not every Muslim reacts like the father George Khan. Of course, I´m against his behaviour and the violent scenes in this film. I´m sure that nobody laughs about it, on the contrary.
I am thoughtful and sad about this scenes. In my opinion shows "East is East" the religion to be a Muslim as a religion which includes violence and insults. The audience get the feeling, everything what the father says is a law. Nobody else have much say anything, especially the women have not to say anything. Another scene, which I don´t like is with the arranged marriage. Yes it´s right that for long time ago arranged marriage was a tradition, but today you are able to find your real love alone.
All in all, I dislike the film, because of the bad representation of the religion. I also think, that everyone can criticise every religion, but not in this way. The film doesn´t display the positive sides of to be a Muslim. At last I want to make clear, that not every man hits his wife or his children in particular. And not every Muslim do it.
Now I want to explain my opinion about the actors and the film technology.
The actors play very realistic, I like it. The director used always the right music while the scene for example, at the beginning scene it was a cheerful music while the ceremony. The different shots makes the film more interesting and we are able to empathize with the actor and the situation.


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.02.2013 - 11:27
Zitat:
I have written a review about the film "East is East".

At first I want to point out two positive aspects.
There are two scenes that are really touching: The scene
when [---]Ella Khan, the mother, protects her children. Here it becomes evident that she is a great mother who does her upmost for her children. The other scene which I like is, shows the children coming together [---] protecting their mother. Here we are shown the
close bond between the family members.

Secondly I now want to point out reasons why I don´t like the film.

At first I want to make clear [---] that not every Muslim reacts like George Khan, the father. Of course, I disapprove of his behaviour and the violent scenes in this film. I´m sure that nobody laughs about them, on the contrary.
I am thoughtful and sad about these scenes. In my opinion "East is East" shows the religion of being a Muslim as a religion which includes violence and insults. The audience gets the feeling that everything [---] the father says is a law. Nobody else has much to say [---], especially the women do not have to say anything. Another scene[---] which I don´t like is [---] the arranged marriage. Yes, it´s right that for long time [---] arranged marriages were [---] tradition, but today you are able to find your real love by yourself.
All in all, I dislike the film, because of the bad
presentation of [---] religion. I also think [---] that everyone can criticise every religion, but not in this way. The film doesn´t display the positive sides of being a Muslim. At last I want to make clear [---] that not every man beats his wife or his children in particular. And not every Muslim does it.

Now I want to explain my opinion about the actors and the film technology.
The actors play very realistically, I liked it. The director always used the right music in each [---] scene. For example, at the beginning scene a cheerful music
was chosen during the ceremony. The different shots make the film more interesting and we are able to sympathize with the actor and the situation.


Ich hoffe, ich konnte etwas helfen; beachte das Zeichen "[---]" bedeutet, dass ich hier etwas gestrichen habe - und sei es auch nur das blöde Komma vor "that".

Ich bin bei meiner Korrektur von der leider etwas unvollständigen Korrektur von "Anonym" ausgegangen.

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