Korrektur Satzbau

Ich soll einem Besucher aus einer anderen Stadt Vorzüge und Nachteile einer Stadt erzählen, und meine Grammatik in Englisch lässt zu wünschen übrig, bitte einmal drüber schauen, damit ich da noch mal drüber gucke und es verbessere!

As a visitor in Germany, you should definitely explore the capital Berlin.
The city offers a good mix of culture and fun activities. There are a large number of sights in Berlin. The most important include the Brandenburg Gate, the Gate is one of Berlin`s main sights a landmark and symbol all in one with over two hundred years of history. The Memorial Church or the Kaiser Wilhelm Memorial Church is the symbolic center of West Berlin, a memorial against war, peace and reconciliation. And last but not least, the Reichstag and the famous Kurfürstendamm boulevard. Today a visit to the Reichstag is a must. Visitor highlights include a lift ride to the top of the building to a large viewing terrace for the breathtaking views of Tiergarten, the dome and the mirror cylinder at the centre. The Kurfürstendamm is dominated by retail stores and restaurants, and is considered one of the tourist focal points in the Berlin City-West viewed. I think as a visitor you can save yourself the way to Prenzlauer Berg. Here you can meet almost all high-income people in middle age and their precocious children. The municipality is a white island in the otherwise colorful Berlin: pretty, expensive and without any variety.