Summary des ersten Kapitels des Buches Moonstruck von Ferro

Hallo erstmal! Ich muss morgen eine Lesemappe zum Buch "Moonstruck" abgeben und überprüfe grade die Aufgaben. Ich würde gerne wissen ob diese Summary die ich geschrieben habe in Ordnung ist und ich sie so abgeben kann:

The novel "Moonstruck" from Charles Ferro, is
about two protagonists, Susan and Mike. In
chapter one, we found out that Mike is new in
Geneva, New York. He comes from
Milwaukee. Helen Dinesen, Diane Johnson and
Patty Costner are standing by him an touching
him. Susan think the girls are very silly,
because their giggling when they stand around
him and he say something. Mike is like Susan
sixteen years old. One day he ask Susan if she
likes go with him to the schooldance. She
answer with yes and so the two go to the dance.
At the schooldance Susan dance with a couple
of boys and a few girls. The must of the time,
Mike stand at the other end of the room with
some boys from their class. Susan wear a blue
dress, Patty too, but Susan wear it because she
like it. Patty wear the blue dress only because
Mike said it is his favorite color. One time Patty
and Mike dance and when the musik stop,
Mike goes back to the other boys. A slow song
begin and Susan ask her best friend, Anna
Marie, to go outside. The two girls walk outside
and Susan feel a hand which touch her shoulder
softly. It is Mike`s hand and he ask her to
dance. She whisper "yes" and they go back to
the dancefloor. The rest of the evening they only
dance with each other. After the dance is Mike
walk Susan home. Susan hope that he will try
to kiss her. They walk on the sidewalk, along
the park and Susan go very slowly for many
with Mike. But she must be home at twelve
o`clock. Susan tell Mike about her father and
Mike tell her about his parents. Also Susan tell
him that her mother is dead. He did not know
what to say, but Susan say it is okay. The two
laugh when they found that both their parents
had been hippies. Their are close to Susan`s
house and Mike kiss her. After a short time
Susan tell him that she must go home. Mike
ask for to do something together tomorrow. She
ask him if knows her number. He say "yes".
Susan want to know how he know it. Mike say
that a little bird had told him her number. They
cross the street and suddenly Susan feel not
good and fall. But Mike carrie her. After a few
seconds, Susan feel better and she kiss him and
go to her house. Mike go into the park, because
it is the fastest way to the Larchmont Street,
where he and his family live. He hear
something in the bushes when he walk in the
park. He stop and the noise stop. He take a few
steps and then he is attack by a unknown beast.
First he think it is a dog but then he see a hand
that is covered with hair.