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Frage: Fehler im "Englisch-Referat"? Bitte sagen :)
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Since the last Thursday in Florida a man is missing and fearing dead after a sinkhole suddenly opened up under his bedroom.
But at first I want to explain some unknown words. Sinkhole is easy to under stand, because you all know the words "sink" and "hole". Acidic is the opposite of sweet. The name of the man is Jeff Bush and he`s 36 years old. On Thursday evening his family heart a loud crash, like a car ran into the back of the house. So they rushed to his bedroom and all they could see was a part of a mattress sticking out of a big hole. After they realized, they called the police and rescuer. The brother of Jeff jumped into the sinkhole and tried to find him, but at least he must be rescued by a police man. The rescuers had tried all possibilities to find Jeff, but it was too dangerous, because the hole was still growing. They had to interrupt. The police said, that they think Jeff is dead, because they had no sign of life. 3 other adults and a child were in the house at the time the sinkhole openend up and they are all still alive. Now the hole is about 15 meters deep and 30 meters across.
Frage von Monty-1996 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 06.03.2013 - 17:46


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Antwort von Fehlerfinder007 | 06.03.2013 - 17:54
Since the last Thursday a man is missing in Florida and feared dead after a sinkhole suddenly opened up under his bedroom.
But Firstly I want to explain some unknown words. Sinkhole is easy to understand because you all know the words "sink" and "hole". Acidic is the opposite of sweet. The man`s name is Jeff Bush and he`s 36 years old. On Thursday evening his family heard a loud crash like a car ran into the back of the house. Because of that they rushed into his bedroom and all they could see was a part of a mattress sticking out of a big hole. After they realized what happend they called the police and rescuer. Jeffs brother jumped into the sinkhole and tried to find him, but in the end he had to be rescued by a police man. The rescuers tried everything to find Jeff, but it was too dangerous because the hole was still growing. So they had to interrupt. The police said that they think Jeff is dead because there is no sign of him still living. Three other adults and a child were in the house at the time the sinkhole openend up and they are all still alive. Now the hole is about 15 meters deep and 30 meters wide.

Ich hab bei einigen Formulierungen noch was umgestellt, aber meiner Meinung nach müsste es so stimmen. ;)


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Antwort von Monty-1996 (ehem. Mitglied) | 06.03.2013 - 18:46
Super! :)
herzlichen Dank! :))


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 06.03.2013 - 20:45
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Since [---] last Thursday a man has been missing in Florida and has been feared dead after a sinkhole suddenly
had opened up under his bedroom. But firstly I want to explain some unknown words. Sinkhole is easy to understand because you all know the words "sink" and "hole". Acidic is the opposite of sweet. The man`s name was Jeff Bush and he was 36 years old. On Thursday evening his family heard a loud crash as if a car had runinto the back of the house. Because of that they rushed into his bedroom and all they could see was a part of a mattress sticking out of a big hole. After they realized what had happend they called the police and the rescuers. Jeff`s brother jumped into the sinkhole and tried to find him, but in the end he had to be rescued by a police man. The rescuers tried everything to find Jeff, but it was too dangerous because the hole was still growing. So they had to interrupt their efforts. The police said that they think Jeff is dead because there is no sign of him still living. Three other adults and a child were in the house at the time the sinkhole openend up and they are all still alive. Now the hole is about 15 meters deep and 30 meters wide.


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