Essay Kontrolle

Zitat:
Telecommuting has become (1) more and more common in our society, while working in an office has decreased,(1) unfortunately.

Both types of working can now be found in
nearly every [--] place [--] of traditional office work (2). In the following essay, I am going(3) to show / point out (4)the advantages and disadvantages of telecommuting.

On the one hand,(5) people who work at home, especially [---] parents, often have more privacy and flexibiliy of work. For instance, while working at home ,they are able [--] to take care of their children or pets as well (2). In addition to that, labourers working (6) at home are more independent than those who work in an office, as they are able to decide for themselves when they want to start or finish working (2). Furthermore, working at home is more comfortable [---] because a person who does not commute to and fro his place of work saves money and time. (2)

On the other hand, it can bequite boring if people work at home because they miss the contact with his/her collegues (2). Therefore, {---] those who work at home are not able to talk aboutevents [---] they have experienced at the week-end, for example.
Furthermore, if employees have problems they will not have the chance of getting help from the group of co-workers.

Concluding I want to point out that the advantages like privacy and flexibility, independence and comfort outweighthe disadvantages like boredom or the lack of (2) face to face contact. That is why I prefer working at home. [---] I do not need any social contacts, and if I have any problems I will give my colleagues a call to solve problems with them.