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Englisch Text Kontrollieren - he she it s muss mit

Frage: Englisch Text Kontrollieren - he she it s muss mit
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Hi da der Text beim Korrekturlesen ein bisschen doof klingt möchte ich das ihr hier noch mal drüber schaut. Bitte achtet noch mal auf das "S" bei he she it .


Danke schonmal :-)


This is a strip cartoon about Max. Max is a 19 year old man. He likes the nature and goes walking every day. Max works for a big architecture company. And he really likes his job. But there are also some points he dislikes.


Max usually stars his work at 7 am. And he drives with his car to work, because it is a long way to New York.

Now Max is at work. He works with six team mates. He is the best worker of all. But his attendant is severe.

After lunch Max presents his new living concept to the management of the company. Although Max does not like to present things, due to the fact that he becomes nervous easily, he made a good presentation.

Because his employer likes his presentation so much he promoted Max to the main drawer. Now Max is very happy, because now he has his own office and more space to work on his projects.

After that exiting business day Max is really tired, but he looks forward to the following day.
Frage von hauke-peters (ehem. Mitglied) | am 09.02.2012 - 17:46

 
Antwort von GAST | 10.02.2012 - 18:08
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This is a strip cartoon about Max. Max is a 19 year old man. He likes [---] nature and goes walking every day. Max works for a big architecture company. And he really likes his job. But there are also some points he dislikes.


Max usually starts his work at 7 am. And he drives to work in his car,
because it is a long way to New York.

Now Max is at work. He works with six team mates. He is the best worker of them all. But his attendant is severe what do you want to say?.

After lunch Max presents his new living concept to the management of the company. Although Max does not like presenting things, due to the fact that he becomes nervous easily, he has made a good presentation.

As his employer has liked his presentation so much he has promoted Max to [---] main drawer . Now Max is very happy, because now he has his own office and more space to work on his projects.

After that exiting business day Max is really tired, but he is looking forward to the following day.

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