Englisch Text Kontrollieren - he she it s muss mit

Hi da der Text beim Korrekturlesen ein bisschen doof klingt möchte ich das ihr hier noch mal drüber schaut. Bitte achtet noch mal auf das "S" bei he she it .


Danke schonmal :-)


This is a strip cartoon about Max. Max is a 19 year old man. He likes the nature and goes walking every day. Max works for a big architecture company. And he really likes his job. But there are also some points he dislikes.


Max usually stars his work at 7 am. And he drives with his car to work, because it is a long way to New York.

Now Max is at work. He works with six team mates. He is the best worker of all. But his attendant is severe.

After lunch Max presents his new living concept to the management of the company. Although Max does not like to present things, due to the fact that he becomes nervous easily, he made a good presentation.

Because his employer likes his presentation so much he promoted Max to the main drawer. Now Max is very happy, because now he has his own office and more space to work on his projects.

After that exiting business day Max is really tired, but he looks forward to the following day.