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Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix:Book Report kürzen

Frage: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix:Book Report kürzen
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Hallo alle zusammen. Neulich habe ich`n bookreport bei meinem lehrer abgegeben und der meinte das des zu lang wäre und ich des verkürzen soll. So um die 300 Wörter sollten es ein. Aber ich kann des irgendwie nicht kürzer machen da man den zusammenhang nicht versteht. Die Frage lautet also wie würdet ihr es machen hier mein REPORT:



A new year has started and Harry is back at Privet Drive with his aunt and uncle. But at once Dementors (they are creatures that guard the wizard prison, and they can suck out all of the happiness of any living being) appear in the street while walking with his cousin. Harry chased the Dementors with his wand. The Ministry of magic knows immediately that Harry used magic in the presence of a muggle and so he has to be in the hearing. Harry wins the hearing, because he was in trouble. The rest of his vacation he spent with his best friends Ron and Hermione at the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix (a secret organization fighting against Voldemort and his followers). Meanwhile, Hogwarts has got a new teacher of Defense Against the Dark Arts: Dolores Jane Umbrige from the Ministry. She turns out to be evil and all the students hate her at once. Since she doesn`t teach anyone anything, Harry founds a group called Dumbledore`s Army, which is supposed to help students defend themselves against Voldemort. But because the ministry doesn`t believe that the most powerful man in the world is ruling and only has the word of a 15-year-old, they think that it`s all a bluff and Dumbledore only wants to be the minister. Umbrige finds out that the the students have established a secret organization and wants them to be suspended. But Dumbledore protects them by lying, which makes Umbrige Headmistress. Umbrige`s violence against the students make them suffer even more. Hagrid, who takes care of the magical creatures and Hogwarts gamekeeper, tells Harry, Hermione and Ron about his mission that he has received from Dumbledore. Then they get to face a giant. Eventually, Harry has a dream about a door, but when he tries to open it, he wakes up. This continues on with the dreams of weeks but eventually he dreams about the door again. This time he goes through the door and sees Sirius Black (Harry`s godfather) being tortured to give Voldemort something. Harry wakes up sweating and wants to help him, now he knows where the site is located: in the Ministry. With a few friends, he goes on the way down to the exit, but Umbrige caught them, but they can get away with a trick by leading them to the forbidden forest and is carried away by a Centaur. Once in the ministry they must pass through various doors. They don`t know which door is the right one, so it takes a long time to find where they want to get. They are in the room of prophecies and Harry finds a ball with his and Voldemort`s names, but he can`t see neither Voldemort nor Sirius. Until they realize that it was a trap. As soon as he has the ball in his hands Voldemort`s followers appear and try to take the ball from him. Since the ball with the prophecy had only Harry`s and Voldemort`s names on it, only they could touch it. Since Voldemort doesn`t want the ministry to know that he`s back, he sends Harry a false dream. Shortly after the order of the phoenix fights him, which causes the ball to break, leaving the content unknown. Sirius is killed by a curse from Bellatrix Lastrange who can flee thereafter. Even Dumbledore and Voldemort were joined by a short time on it. Because they are concentrated with the duell, Dumbledore doesn`t notice the arrival of the minister and gets caught. But Voldemort disappears immediately. It turns out that Dumbledore and Harry were right and Dumbledore becomes headmaster again.
Frage von Siktirwow (ehem. Mitglied) | am 06.12.2011 - 16:51


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Antwort von matata | 06.12.2011 - 16:54
Wenigstens den Buchtitel und den Autor musst du uns verraten. Wie sollen wir einen Text kürzen,
wenn wir nicht einmal wissen, worauf er sich bezieht?
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Antwort von Siktirwow (ehem. Mitglied) | 06.12.2011 - 17:07
Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix


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Antwort von Timea | 06.12.2011 - 18:24
A new year has started and Harry is back at Privet Drive with his aunt and uncle. But at once Dementors (they are creatures that guard the wizard prison, and they can suck out all of the happiness of any living being) appear in the street while walking with his cousin. Harry chased the Dementors with his wand. The Ministry of magic knows immediately that Harry used magic in the presence of a muggle and so he has to be in the hearing. Harry wins the hearing, because he was in trouble. The rest of his vacation he spent with his best friends Ron and Hermione at the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix (a secret organization fighting against Voldemort and his followers).

Harry, who spends his holidays at Privet Drive with his relatives as usually, is attacked by dementors. They are very dangerous creatures that usually guard the wizard prison Azkaban. To defend himself, Harry has to use magic and is almost expelled from school. However, at his hearing the wizard council decides that Harry had no choice but use magic to save his cousin and himself, so he is allowed to go back to school and spend the rest of his holidays with his friends at the headquarter of the Order of Phoenix, a secret organization fighting against Voldemort.

aus 124 werden 98 Wörter ;) nach diesem Schema kannst du doch noch einiges kürzen. Vor allem wenn du etwas schon erwähnt hast, zb: es reicht wenn du einmal kurz schilderst, dass Harry versucht den anderen etwas beizubringen und Umbridge von dieser Organisation Wind bekommt. (Umbridge finds out about this organisation - statt Umbridge finds out that they ...)

oder zB: Once in the ministry they must pass through various doors. They don`t know which door is the right one, so it takes a long time to find where they want to get. - In the ministry they have to try many doors until they get where they want to. (3 Sätze die alle dasselbe erklären, werden somit zu einem).

hoffe dieser Ansatz hilft dir ;)

Und daneben musst du dich fragen, was ist ganz relevant um zu verstehen was in dem Buch passiert (Wer, Was, Wo, Wie, Warum?) - Harry und seine Freunde, Mitglieder des Order of Phoenix
gegen wen die kämpfen - was passiert. Zb ist es nicht wichtig, so genau zu schildern, dass/wie oft Harry so oft von der Tür träumt - viel einfacher wäre zu sagen: Durch einen Traum findet er heraus, dass Sirius im Ministerium ist. (gleich 3 Sätze gespart)

lg

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