Englisch text korrigieren

Hallo könnt ihr für mich die Rechtschreib und Grammatikfehlern usw korrigieren. Ich find keins mehr aber mein Lehrer findet immer etwas. Deshalb will ich mal`n Text abgeben welches fehlerfrei ist.




The fantasy book ,,Harry Potter and the Order of the phoenix“ was written by J. K. Rowling in the year 2003. It’s about a boy who’s destiny is to survive Voldemorts rage and to make the minestry of magic clear that Voldemort returns. He wants to join in the Order of the Phoenix who fights against Voldemort and its followers but unfortunately he is underage to join in. In the school Harry has two best friends. Ronald and Hermione. They get a new teacher in the school named Umbrige from the Ministry. It comes out that her character is like an evil. Everybody hates her and because of her the headmaster of the Hogwarts school of magic; Dumbledore has been suspended. I think this erects the reader to read further. Once Harry gets a dream in the school, about his godfather torturing by Voldemort in the Ministry. Harry knows that the dream is real so he went with his friends to the Ministry to rescue him. But unfortunately Voldemort sent Harry a fake illusion. A battle started and not long the whole Order of the Phoenix appears and Dumbledore himself. At this point it’s very exciting. Because all Harry Potter fans knows that Voldemort fears Dumbledore and the reader want to see a fight. It’s hard for Voldemort to kill Harry now so he disappears after the endless battle against Dumbledore but while he disappears the minister catch a glance of him. So he believes that Voldemort returns.
In my opinion this book is the most brilliant book I’ve ever read. What make this book exciting are the moments, where they battle a lot and in the book Harry is always in danger; especially without Dumbledore. In this book he was on his own and so you see he couldn’t tell Dumbledore about his dreams so he handled alone. I thoroughly recommend this fantasy novel to all people. It’s not hard to understand. But I think if you want to understand the coherences you have to read all parts of them to get it.