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A detailed Curriculm Vitae

My name is x.
At the moment I live in x. The street, in which I live, is called x. I was born on 14. December 1995 in x at the x. x, my mother, was born on 3. October 1957 in x. In the same city, which my father, x, was born. The date of birth is on 21. May 1959.My parents are self-employed and have a restaurant in x. It is called “x”. I have two siblings, who are older than I. My brother, x, was born on 16. February 1980 in Plauen and is single. My Sister x, nee x, was born on 23. October 1981 in Plauen. At twenty-six she married her boyfriend, x. Together they have a son. His name is x. My two siblings lerned the occupation from a cook. My brother complete a study for business administration. Now he is self-employed and managed his self restaurant in x. It is called “x”. x is strenuous at the employment. She work at a hotel in x, which is called “x”. Die first three years of my life I passed at home in charge of my parents and grandparents. After my third year of one’s life I visited the kindergarten and the preschool in x. At 1. September 2001 began my apprenticeship. I start this on the elementary school. Four years later I visited the grammarschool, because I have a aim. In the year 2014 I will accomplish a general qualification for university entrance. At the moment I’m at the tenth class at the grammar school in x. Inside of my apprenticeship for foreign language I lern English and French. At this school it gives two specialisms. I balloted the natural science, because I like our nature. If I walk by the landscape, I photograph all. The photography and the work with the photos are terrific. Therefore my favorite subjects are biology, physiks and a little chemistry. At my future I will lern a scientific job. In my free time I like to play with my dog Ares, because I like animals. Also I meet my friends, because I like to be in a community at my age or I spend time with my boyfriend. The people, who know myself, say, that I have some qualities. These are for example organized, helpful, critical, responsible, powerful and curious. But I know, that I have some bad characteristics. These are cutty, bitchy, unfair, and so on. Workings, which I do skill, are in such a way managing, persuading people, debating and working with numbers. I like to planning trips and events.