Englisch - Dialog korrigieren , bitte !

Hallo. Wie bestimmt schon einige wissen bin ich nicht die Beste in enlisch. Ich muss aber leider für die Schule ein Dialog halten mit einem Mädchen dass noch weniger englisch kann als ich:)


Das ist der Text den ich geschrieben habe:

( R ) Hi Pamela. I`m glad, that you could come
( P ) You`re welcome
( R ) come sit
( P ) How are you ?
( R ) Not so well ( Sie greift zur Flasche )
( P ) I thought you stopped drinking
( R ) I can`t. I don`t make it allone
( P ) You` re not allone. You are my best friend, I will
always be there for you
( R ) The reason why I want that you come so fast is:
I`m pregnant.
( P ) Oh Randa
( R ) ( Greift erneut zur Flasche )
( P ) ( Nehme ihr die Flasche weg ) You have a hugh
responsibility, not only for your life seperate
for the liefe of your unborn child too.

( R ) Oh Pamela, that`s not a child yet, it`s just
so small
( P ) Randa, even in the first months of pregnancy can
big malformations happen
( R ) That`s not true. What are you telling there
( P ) If you don`t believe me then ask your gynecologist
( R ) Ah he knows nothing too. In addition I don`t drink
so much as before, to the baby will just nothing
happen
( P ) Randa, alcohol is poison for you and for your baby.
All that you take to you, the baby gets too.
Thatswhy is every drip alcohol to much.
Randa, I know you love children and you ever
wanted to have someone. Do you want that your
child come healthy to the world.
( R ) Of course I want. But the time is so wrong.
( P ) Yes, but it`s not possible to change. Do you want
the child or do you don`t want the child.
( R ) I want it.
( P ) Then you have to go to the rehab
( R ) Yes, you are right. I don`t make it allone.
I will go to rehab.
( P ) I`m glad, that`s the right decision.

Bitte helft mir, korriegiert mich