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Angus is an outsider , because he is fat and his name is a cow name and he can`t dance.
Melissa is important in his life , because Angus know her till the kindergarten and Angus like Melissa, but he has never talk with her.
Angus`s moment come possible , because the friend of Melissa has paied other people to vote Angus for the dance.
For Angus it`s work very good , because he dance with Melissa and it isn`t embrassing for him and it`s happens very good , because Melissa want dance again with Angus.

c)

I think his life has change , because he doesn`t had been mobbed more and she has dance with Melissa.

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a.That`s said Angus.
b.That`s said her boyfriend.
c.That`s said Melissa.
d.That`s said Angus.

4.
I think the story deals about teenagers problems, because it`s show that not all teeanager treated equally, how in the story Angus will treated differently , because he is fat and his name is a cow name.