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Educating Rita bitte korrigieren +Verbesserungsvorschläge:)

Frage: Educating Rita bitte korrigieren +Verbesserungsvorschläge:)
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Hallöchen ihr lieben,

wäre sehr lieb, wenn mir jemand diesen Text kontrollieren könnte und sich darüber äüßert was man besser machen könnte.Es geht um das buch Educating Rita.
Hier ist Die Aufgabe:

Explain Ritas conception in working class.


Mein text:

At first she was a young Liverpudlian working-hairdresser who signs up for a course at the Open University because she is eager to learn.
Rita’s education is not restricted to scholastic learning alone, her transformation from the uneducated Rita to the educated Susan is all encompassing. Rita sees and understands the importance of being well educated, but for Rita, education helps her to overcome her background and break away from the traditional role expected of a woman in the 1970s. Rita has set herself on a course of self-discovery, she has a determination to control her own life and make her own choices. Rita believes it is education that will give her these choices. Rita knows that the value of education goes far beyond simple intellectual enlightenment. Education entirely changes Rita which, though she is prepared for a change, effects her life enormously.Rita’s background has held her back and put her at a disadvantage. There was a great deal of research done in the 1970s to show that middle class children were far more likely to do well at school and to go on to university than working-class children like Rita. Rita’s background has held her back and put her at a disadvantage. There was a great deal of research done in the 1970s to show that middle class children were far more likely to do well at school and to go on to university than working-class children like Rita.

Bitte korrigieren, ich brauch es bis morgen. Vielen Dank im voraus.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 13.01.2010 - 17:36


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.01.2010 - 17:49
At first Rita [würde im ersten Satz nicht gleich mit "she" anfangen, sondern erst mal den Namen einführen] is [du hast schließlich alles im Präsens]a young Liverpudlian hairdresser who signs up for a course at the Open University because she is eager to learn.
Rita’s education is not restricted to scholastic learning alone, her transformation from the uneducated Rita to the educated Susan is all-encompassing. Rita sees and understands the importance of being well educated, but for her education is helpful for overcoming her background and break away from the traditional role expected of a working-class woman in the 1970s. Rita sets herself on a course of self-discovery, she has a determination to control her own life and make her own choices. She believes it is education that will give her these choices. Rita knows that the value of education goes far beyond simple intellectual enlightenment. Education entirely changes Rita who, though she is prepared for a change, effects her life enormously. Rita’s background has held her back and put her at a disadvantage. There was a great deal of research done in the 1970s to show that middle class children were far more likely to do well at school and to go on to university than working-class children like Rita.

Habe nur wenig verändert. Der Text ist sprachlich sehr gut. Inhaltlich wüsste ich spontan nicht, was fehlen würde.

 
Antwort von GAST | 13.01.2010 - 18:32
Vielen Dank, algieba, du hast mir sehr geholfen. Nun kann ich erleichtert an die nächsten Aufgaben rangehen.

Schönen Abend noch.:)


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.01.2010 - 18:45
Achso: well-educated auf jeden Fall mit Bindestrich.

Nochmal nen schönen Abend...

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