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Child labour is today a order of the day in Asia, Africa, Latin America and also in Europe.
Worldwide have similary 250 million children to work from the age five until fourteen.

The working conditions are very hard for the children. (Sarina)

What kind of work must they do
They must for example cord(nähen) T-shirts and cheap bags in Bangkok and Seoul, make footballs in Peshawar or work in India, Patisktan, Nepal and cord carpets(Teppiche). But they also clean shoes and cars and pick up the waste. Or the girls work as housemaids(Dienstmädchen) in private houses. (Lena)

The reasons why they do this
The children do this because their families are large and poor. The children have to help their family and earn their share of the family income. A other reason is that the schools in some places in the world are so bad that the children prefer working instead of going to school or they have to pay for their schools. The children arenŽt organized in trade unions which could defend their rights and fight for better working conditions. (Sarina)

Why children not adults?
For employers it is cheaper to give work to children, especially to girls, who earn even less than boys. (Annika)

Data of child labour
Very often itŽs very difficult to get reliable data on child labour. Lots of the children arenŽt registered when they was born, so itŽs hard to tell how old they aren when they start working. And how we say before some work in private houses. ItŽs difficult to do anything about it because there arenŽt any statistics. (Annika)

Gasexplosions in Thailand
In a matchstick firm in Thailand six girls under 14 years died because of the explosion. ItŽs hard to understand but the explosions was only three lines long in the German medias. (Lena)