Kann jemand bitte Korrektur lesen?

A t-shirt for 2.50 euros, a pair of jeans for 9: The Irish fashion chain Primark conquered the closets German teenager. Critics, however, speak of "catastrophic working conditions". And now there arise the question: should we boycott those factory`s?


A good aspect is that the factory`s mostly offered the workers residential places, where they can live with other workers together.

A other positive aspect is that they can`t live without these job. If they loose their workplace they have mostly no other opportunities. In this case they have to live on the street, collect trash or prostituite for money.

In addition it is hard to  improve the working conditions, because when they get more wage or  the security become better, the factory`s would loose a lot money and the consequence would be that many workers loose their job.

But on the other hand there are a lot of facts that shows that we should 
Boycott these factory`s.

Through the production from garment industry`s arise polluting chemicals, which are thrown out by these factory`s in the environment. For example in seas or the chemicals getting in the groundwater.

Behind the bad wages are existing so much dangerous security states for the worker, which can have consequences for live. 


The worst part is that not only adult workers including suffering, but also  children are working in such hazardous industries, where they set their live on the match.

In my opinion, it is difficult to say whether it is good or bad because both sides are equally weighted.