Indirect speech

Hallo !
kann mir jemand sagen ob das korrekte indirekte Rede ist?

Well, I was really angree with the way my team had played in the first half.
I told david to stay on the right and to move a bit faster. I asked Frank not to left his opponent so much and to attacked as quieckly as possible.

I said to Jack doesn`t talk so much and he should use his legs.

I told Andrew he should tried to head the ball into the goal.

I screamed to John he should has to keep his hands away from the ball.

I told Simon not to kick the ball into the middle.

I gave Alex the advise to kick the ball into the jeffton goal and not in our goal.

I said to Andy not to kept the ball so long he should has passed it to the other players.

To Jason I said he has to ran a bit more. Don`t be so lazy.

Danke im Vorraus