Korda,Michael-How to Be a Leader:Summary kontrollieren,bitte

Hey, wäre super wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet und mir meine Fehler korrigiert (Kommasetzung, Ausdruck evtl.)

Assignment: Write a one-paragraph summary of “How to Be a Leader”


The essay „How to Be a Leader” written by Michael Korda from the year 1981 deals with the requirements of being a leader.

Michael Korda argues that the time of appearing as a leader is of particular importance.
Furthermore Korda asserts that a leader needs to be a bearer of hope with an inimitable identity and a strong appearance. In addition Korda maintains that a leader has to adapt himself to the great public and he has to have the ability to reflect peoples yearnings and wishes.
On the whole Korda argues that the attributes and purposes of people, characterize the leader.

Anmerkung: Ich finde mein Einleitungssatz nicht so toll.
-Mit meinem letzten Satz "on the whole..." wollte ich den folgenden Absatz zusammenfassen:

"Our strength makes him strong; our determination makes him determined; our courage makes him a hero; he is, the final analysis, the symbol of the best in us, shaped by our own spirit and will. And when these qualities are lacking in us, we canÄt produce him; and even with all our skill at image building, we can`t fake him. He is, after all, merely the sum of us."

Kann man meinen letzten Satz so lassen, oder könnte man diesen Absatz besser zusammenfassen?