charakterisierung der atmosphäre?

Zitat:
Sometimes he would walk for hours and miles and return only at midnight to his house. And on his way he would see the cottages and homes with their dark windows, and it was not unequal to walking through a graveyard where only the faintest glimmers of firefly light appeared in flickers behind the windows. Sudden gray phantoms seemed to manifest upon inner room walls where a curtain was still undrawn against the night,

or there were whisperings and murmurs where a window in a tomb-like building was still open.
[---]street be startled by the passing of a lone figure, himself, in the early November evening.
On this particular evening he began his journey in a westerly direction, toward the hidden sea. There was a good crystal frost in the air; it cut the nose and made the lungs blaze like a Christmas tree inside; you could feel the cold light going on and off, all the branches filled with invisible snow. He listened to the faint push of his soft shoes through autumn leaves with satisfaction, and whistled a cold quiet whistle between his teeth, occasionally picking up a leaf as he passed, examining its skeletal pattern in the infrequent lamplights as he went on, smelling its rusty smell.
[---]
The street was silent and long and empty, with only his shadow moving like the shadow of a hawk in mid-country. If he closed his eyes and stood very still, frozen, [---]

Dies ist in Auszügen der Beginn der Kurzgeschichte "The Pedestrian
" von Ray Bradbury (kannst du unter bradbury the pedestrian ergooglen)
Die "atmosphere / mood" einer Geschichte erschließt sich in drer Regel aus den Landschaftsbeschreibungen, aus den Adjektiven; ich habe hier mal die entscheidenden Stellen fett markiert;
Auf Grund dieser Textstellen müsste man die Atmosphäre als " "depressing" / "death like", "unemotional" , "static" "lifeless" beschreiben.

Kujappper

Etwas Anderes swird dir kaum übrig bleiben; du kannst natürlich auch "umgekehrt" schreiben:

"The following quotation "....." (line xx) conveys an atmosphere of / a feeling of depression .../ loneliness .../ decay..."

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