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Hi...Könnt ihr mir Helfen und mal gucken ob dieser Letter of Application Gut ist ? Ob irgendetw. falsch ist...Währe sehr NEtt schreibe morgen eine Klassenarbeit ; ) Danke Im Vorraus und Achja ! XoXo kann irgendetw. heißen ; ) Danke ; )


XoXo XoXo
Str. XX
XXXX Stadt

02th June 2010


Letter of application

Your ad on the „XoXo“ newspaper for a position as a „XoXo“ captured my attention and motivated me to learn more about this opportunity . I believe that my enclosed resume will demonstrate that I have the characteristics and experience you seek.

I am 18 years old and I am still going to school. I will take my A-Levels in summer this year at the “XoXo” school and I plan to enter the field of “XoXo” after it. Therefore I am looking for a holiday job. As a person with extensive experience in “XoXo” I feel I have a lot to contribute to your company. So I would like to apply for the position as a member of your team.

I feel I have the necessary qualifications needed for this job. As you can see from the enclosed CV I did two languages at school: English and French. I speak English fluently. Also I speak as my mother language German and Turkish fluently. As I have studied French for four years I have good skills, which I can you for you company. My hobby’s are … and … .They have helped me to give me a feeling for (dealing with children etc.) . I have no problems to talk to people , I am quite self-confident, reliable and competitive. My experience and practical knowledge of all these are well suited to the goals of your company.(Oder  As far as I can see these are skills that are required in the position you are offering).

I look forward to hearing from you. I am excited about the possibility of working for you company. Should you need more informations , do not hesitate to contact me , you can reach me at (0123) 4567-89 or by e-mail at XoXo@XoXo.com . I am available for an interview of your convenience.

Thank you for giving my application serious consideration.

Yours sincerely,

XoXo XoXo.
Frage von esref (ehem. Mitglied) | am 01.06.2010 - 18:33


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2104		 Antwort von matata | 01.06.2010 - 18:36
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14		 Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 01.06.2010 - 19:27
Dear sir or madam, (oder eben ein Name, wenn der gegeben sein sollte)

your ad for a position as a „XoXo“ in the „XoXo“ newspaper captured my attention and motivated me to learn more about this opportunity . I believe that my enclosed resume will demonstrate that I have the characteristics and experience you seek.

I am 18 years old and (das zweite I kannst du getrost weglassen) still attend school. I will take my A-Levels in summer this year at the “XoXo” school and (das zweite I kannste getrost weglassen) plan to enter the field of “XoXo” after it. Therefore I am looking for a holiday job. As a person with extensive experience in “XoXo”, (dieses Komma gliedert den Satz besser) I feel I can (have to heißt müssen) contribute a lot to your company. So I would like to apply for the position as a member of your team.

I feel (das hast du schon im vorletzten Satz) I have the necessary qualifications needed for this job. As you can gather (ist besserer style) from the enclosed CV, I had two languages at school: English and French. I speak English fluently. Furthermore, I speak German and Turkish, my two mother languages, fluently. As I have studied French for four years I have good skills, which I can apply? for your company. My hobbies are … and … . They have helped me to give me a feeling for (dealing with children etc.). I have no problems to talk to people, I am quite self-confident, reliable and competitive. My experience and practical knowledge of all these (vielleicht genauer formulieren) are well-suited to the goals of your company.(Oder  As far as I can see these are skills (ohne that) are required in the position you are offering).

I look forward to hearing from you soon. I am excited about the possibility of working for you company. Should you need more information, do not hesitate to contact me. You can reach me at (soll der Text in amerikanischem Englisch geschrieben werden? Sonst nimm lieber on oder under.) (0123) 4567-89 or via email at XoXo@XoXo.com. I am available for an interview at your convenience.

Thank you for giving my application serious consideration.

Yours sincerely,

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