Would you go to America?; Why? Why not?

America is a large country with very much habitants. This country is public with the film industry and the fast food restaurants.

When you want to go to America you`ve many advantages as here in Germany. For example you can live the American dream "from rages to riches". and work at Hollywood. You are also more independet as in Germany. And when you are educated you can archieve a lot of things.
But in America you haven`t a basic requirement like in Germany the unemployment benefit (Hartz 4). So you must care for yourself that you get not a homeless people.

Wir sollten den Text erst mal etwas "glätten":

America is a large country with very many[/]habitants. This country is [b]famous forthe film industry and the fast food restaurants.
if you want to go to America you will have more advantages here asin Germany. For example you can live the American dream "from rags to riches". and work inHollywood. You are also more independant than in Germany. And if you are educated enoughyou can achieve a lot of things.
But in America you haven`t got basic requirements like in Germany, as for example the unemployment benefit (Hartz 4). So you must care for yourself that you won`t become one of the homeless people.

fett = hier habe ich Korrekturen o. Veränderungen voergenommen.

Meine Korrektur besagt nicht, dass ich mit dem Text inhaltlich übereinstimme.

ha.lo