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Aber: We also see the difference between our and the indian culture.

Without knowing what it is, he meets the young jewish boy Shmuel there.

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In my opinion the film is very good, because it is very [Wortwiederholung] amazing and realistic. It [What?]actually happens in a lot of Indian homes. I think people who see the film will think much different about girls playing football. Also we can observe the differences between our and the Indian culture. I think girls can do anything that guys can do, if they have the determination to overcome all the obstacles like Jess.

In summary Jess is in love with football but her parents don’t allow her to play [Fußball kann man nicht machen] it, because of the Indian culture. One day a girl, Jules, invites her to join an all-girl football team. She joins it, but she doesn’t tell her parents about it. Besides Jules and Jess both fell in love with their coach, Joe. Moreover, Jess almost kisses him when they play football in Germany and Jules becomes angry and jealous. As Jess is very sad at her sister’s wedding day, her father allows her to go to the important match with the talent scout. Finally Jess and Joe come together and Jess and Jules go to an American football university.

In summary Bruno’s family has to move near a concentration camp, because Bruno’s father gets promoted as a supervisor. At first Bruno is bored in the new house, because he is not very interested in the german history which he and his sister Gretel get taught by a private tutor. However, later Bruno explores everything around the house and sees the concentration camp. Without knowing what it is he meets the young Jewish boy Shmuel there. Besides Bruno’s mother gets angry with her husband, because she realizes the situation and wants to move away with their [sind ja wohl auch die Kinder vom Vater, oder?] children. Finally Bruno puts on prison clothes, because he wants to help Shmuel finding his father. In the end both die in the gas chamber.

Schreibt man nicht erst eine Zusammenfassung und danach die eigene Meinung?

Zum 2. aufsatz:
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In summary Jess loves football
dann kommts zu keinen missverständnissen ;)