Englisch Korrektur - Part 1

Wow, super!
Danke, danke, danke!

Nope. ;)

Das ist durchaus in Ordnung, was einfachdu da geschrieben hat. Hier funktioniert sowohl "south of America" als auch die Genitiv-Konstruktion.

Falsch ist die nicht, deswegen habe ich das auch nicht korrigiert.

Siehe hier:
http://www.abc.net.au/correspondents/content/2008/s2337447.htm
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_was_life_like_in_America`s_South_in_the_1940`s
http://www.economist.com/world/unitedstates/displaystory.cfm?story_id=10024708
http://delong.typepad.com/sdj/2007/09/rich-white-tras.html

:)

Although working very hard it seems to be hopeless for Scarlett to save the cotton-plantage. Because of the fact that she needs money, Scarlett marries a rich man called Frank Keneddy. He has the money that Scarlett needs for Tara. But also this marriage does not keep long: Frank Keneddy dies when he wants to take revenge on an enemy. Immiadetely after the death of her second husband, Rhett Buttler asks for Scarletts hand in marriage. Although Scarlett still loves Ashley, she accepts the proposal of him because of seing him as a financial resource. Scarlett bears a child but nevertheless Scarlett abides by her love against Ashley.
One day Scarlett meets Ashley: When the two of them start talking about the wartime Ashley consoles Scarlett with a friendly embrace. India, Ashley´s sister, sights this scene and gossips about an affair. After Rheet Buttler hears about this pretended affair a distance between the two accrues. Ashley´s wife Melanie dies when she bears a child. On her deathbed, she asks Scarlett to look after Ashley for her, as Scarlett had looked after her for Ashley. With her dying breath, Melanie also tells Scarlett to be kind to Rhett, that he loves her. Outside, Ashley collapses in tears, helpless without his wife. Only then does Scarlett realize that she never could have meant anything to him, and that she had loved something that never really existed. She runs home to find Rhett packing to leave her, she begs him not to leave, telling him she realizes now that she had loved him all along, that she never really loved Ashley. But Rhett Buttler does not want to listen to her anymore and leaves.


kann jmd. auch mal hierreingucken?^^

danke

Ohne große Kommentare, dann geht´s fixer.

Although SHE IS working very hard KOMMA SAVING THE COTTON-PLANTAGE seems to be hopeless TO Scarlett. Because of the fact that she needs money, Scarlett marries a rich man called Frank Keneddy (spelling?). He has the money that Scarlett needs for Tara. But this marriage AS WELL does not LAST long AND Frank Keneddy dies whILE WANTING TO take revenge on an enemy. (hier vielleicht inhaltliche Ergänzung wie er stirbt? Oder was das mit dem "Rächen" bedeutet?)

Immiadetely after HER SECOND HUSBAND`S death, Rhett Buttler asks for Scarlett-APOSTROPH-s hand in marriage. Although Scarlett still loves Ashley, she accepts RHETT`S proposal because SHE SEES him as a financial resource. Scarlett bears a child but never STOPS LOVING Ashley.

One day Scarlett meets Ashley PUNKT When the two of them start talking about the wartime KOMMA Ashley consoles Scarlett with a friendly embrace. India, Ashley´s sister, OBSERVES this scene and STARTS SPREADING RUMOURS about an affair. After RheTt Buttler hears about this ALLEGED affair KOMMA [a distance between the two accrues.]

Nicht ganz klar. "Distance between" Rhett und Ashley oder Rhett und Scarlett? Egal welches Paar: "he distances himself from ..." oder "the distance between A and B grows".

Ashley´s wife Melanie dies whILE GIVING BIRTH (oder: during childbirth). On her deathbed, she asks Scarlett to look after Ashley IN HER STEAD, as Scarlett had looked after her BEFORE IN ASHLEY`S STEAD.

Inhaltlich könntest du auch hier noch kurz ergänzen was da los war, weil es so nicht ganz klar wird: was war da los?

With her dying breath, Melanie also tells Scarlett to be kind to Rhett, AND that he loves her. Outside, Ashley collapses in tears, helpless without his wife. Only then does Scarlett realize that she COULD HAVE NEVER meant anything to him, and that she had loved something that never really existed.

Letzter Teil ist nicht falsch, vielleicht etwas umformulieren? "that she had attached feeling to a relationship that was never really true love?" o.ä.?

She runs home to find Rhett packing AND WANTING to leave her SEMIKOLON she begs him not to leave, telling him she realizes now that she had loved him all along, AND that she never really loved Ashley. But Rhett Buttler does not want to listen to her anymore and leaves.

Inhaltlich alles super, was die Richtigkeit angeht im Prinzip auch nicht viele Fehler. :)
Mir fällt auf dass es an ein paar Stellen so wirkt, als hätte dir eine Vokabel gefehlt, die du dann nachgeschlagen hast - allerdings ohne Kontext. So bei "aus der Stadt flüchten" im ersten Teil oder "abides by her love" hier.

Tipp: ganze Wendungen suchen, wenn du kannst (z.B. über Leo) und/oder googlen mit der Wendung in Anführungszeichen. "abide by her love" ergibt bei Google sagenhafte ZWEI(!) Treffer im weltweiten Internet - das sieht also schlecht aus. ;)
Ähnlich bei "absconding out of" - gibt zwar mehr Treffer, aber: es steht in den meisten Fällen "absconding PUNKT Out of...." - und zum anderen steht es nur im Zusammenhang mit Straftaten, Gerichten, Polizei usw. :)