"The Phantom Coach" Korrektur der Inhaltsangabe :S nd help

also ertsma heisst es at the beginning und dann versteh ich nicht was du mit dem satz sagen willst:"a man tells his tremendousness, dreadful and shoking event wich is happen twenty years ago"-> ein man erzählt seiner ungeheuerlichkeit,schrecklich und schockierendes event welches passiert vor 20 jahren" so würd ich das auf deustch übersstzen.. zunächsteinmal heisst es " ... event which has happened 20 years ago" und ja.. den rest des satzes müssztes dubitte nochma auf deutsch hinschreiben.

und dann würd ich statt dem("This story is a old story wich happen in the year 1844 one night in December.")sagen: "this story is an old one and was set in 1844 on a snowy december night" snowy weil das später im summary vorkommt und man sonst nicht wüsste dass es schneit.

so das summary:
“James Murry which is married goes for hunting”. On this day he doesn’t have any luck and later after sunset he gets lost. He can’t see any signs of habitation, no fences and no cultivated land. James begins to run and shouts for help. After no reply he gets scared and stops. He sees a spot of light and runs towards it. There he finds an old man carrying a lantern. James follows the old man to his master’s villa. As it turns out later the old man is a butler named Jacob. When the master appears he stares amazed at James. The master grants James that he can stay here until it stops snowing. Inside the villa James sees many books about ghost, spirits and spectres, bottle of chemical things and other geological objects.
As the snowing stops, James leaves to take a coach which was only five miles away from here, Jacob ( the old man )leads him there.

On their way Jacob tells James about an accident with a coach and shows him the place where it took place nine years ago. Jacob leaves James there to walk the left few miles alone and turns around to go home. Short time later he gets into the next coach and as he enters he sees three other passengers. After a few minutes James starts a conversation. But none of the others answers him. All passengers are looking at him and he recognises them to be dead people with red eyes. James gets scared and takes a look around in the coach; all things are covered with mildew and are very old. Then the coach falls in a precipice.

After he woke up he realizes that he is in his room with a doctor and his wife standing next to him. Mrs. Murry declares that a doctor found James in a precipice and that James is the only survivor because he landed in the snow.
so..
den ertsen satzt würd ich nochmal überdenken. bitteschön:)