Fehler suuuchen

Hallo ihr Lieben. Wir haben in Englisch eine Hausaufgabe bekommen und zwar sollen wir uns eine "strange" Person ausdenken und eine kurze Biografie ( eine halbe seite lang) über denjenigen schreiben. Wäre lieb wenn ihr einmal korrigiert. Ich habe auch gar keine Ahnung was in eine Biografie muss und was nicht :/


David Jones was born in 1960 in L.A,where he spend his childhood as a cheerful young boy. Him Mom was housewife and his dad was cook in a big restaurant. David loved to observed animals in their wildeness and looked closely at them. In the age of 26 he left his hometown and went to Chicago where he met Julia. In year 1993 the two had a big marriage. David was a really lazy man and doesn’t want to go to work somewhere.So he decided to start playing for money. Someday he won one million dollar. David and Julia were really happy and bought everything they want.From time to time David started to change his attitude.He become a real show-off because off boasting with his money. After that his friends and his family started to keep away from him. So he lost all the people who were near to him.He became crazy now that he had no social contacts.David become absorbed in watching wild animals and started to catch them for the first time. He took more and more animals home with him and built them enclauseres. One night David sleep between two stags which he catched. He tried to eat and live like his animals.The man eat from the same bowl,sleeped in the same straw,washed himself with his tongue.He was like an animal. In year 2005 he died because of malnutrition.