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Fehlersuche im Dialog

Frage: Fehlersuche im Dialog
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Hallo ich hab einen englischen Dialog geschrieben.

Ich möchte gern wissen ob, irgendetwas falsch ist.
Falls ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge habt, bitte ich euch sie mir mitzuteilen.

Viel Spaß beim lesen, d.





A DISCUSSION ABOUT MONEY

[Scene: Father is sitting on a chair at the living room he read a newspaper, his daughter comes to ask him…..]

Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”

Father: „What´s up?”

Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”

Father: „What for do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”

Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”

Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?” And if you don´t think that your pocket money is enough you should work one time and earn some money!

Daughter: „Oh dad... you don´t have a clue about my life! We have weekend and everybody get money, instead of me!”

Father: „Yes. They maybe don´t behave like you. If you would help your mother with the housework and learn for school, I would maybe give you more money!"

Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
But you can´t see that, because you are never at home!

Father: „Oh really? And what about your last french test?”

Daughter: „Dad it´s enough trust me! I got a good mark in biology this week”

Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”

Daughter: „Thanks daddy, do I get some money from you now?

Father: „How much?”

Daughter: „20£!”

Father: „What? Are you crazy? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”

Daughter: „Oh, dad!”

Father: „20£? that´s too much!”

Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”

Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”

Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”

Father: „ I can’t give you money, before I have talked with your mum about it.”

Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes home in the evening.”

Father: „What´s your problem?”

Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”

Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”

Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”

Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”

Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”

Father: „What did you say?”

Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”
Frage von deziana | am 11.11.2007 - 11:21

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.11.2007 - 11:27
A DISCUSSION ABOUT MONEY

[Scene: Father is sitting on a chair at the living room readING a newspaper, his daughter comes to ask him…(what?..]

Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”

Father: „What´s up?”

Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”

Father: „What do you need more money FOR? You get enough pocket money”

Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”

Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?” And if you don´t think that your pocket money is enough you should work and earn some money!

Daughter: „Oh dad...
you don´t have a clue about my life! We have weekend and everybody getS (he she it das s muss mit) money, instead of me!”

Father: „Yes. They maybe don´t behave like you. If you would help your mother with the housework and learn for school, I would maybe give you more money!"

Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
But you can´t see that, because you are never at home!

Father: „Oh really? And what about your last french test?”

Daughter: „Dad it´s enough, trust me! I got a good mark in biology this week”

Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”

Daughter: „Thanks daddy, do I get some money from you now?

Father: „How much?”

Daughter: „20£!”

Father: „What? Are you crazy? You get 15£ a month, that´s more than enough. ”

Daughter: „Oh, dad!”

Father: „20£? that´s too much!”

Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied(?) up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”

Father: „That sounds good, but honestly, 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”

Daughter: „ You know, I´m saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”

Father: „ I can’t give you money, before I have talked with your mum about it.”

Daughter: „But mum is working, she IS comING (?) home in the evening.”

Father: „What´s your problem?”

Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”

Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t DO ANYTHING ABOUT it.”

Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”

Father: „ You should be equitable, 20£ are too much.”

Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”

Father: „What did you say?”

Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”


ansich passts scho,weiß net obich alles richtig korrigiert habe....

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