Fehlersuche im Dialog

Hallo ich hab einen englischen Dialog geschrieben.

Ich möchte gern wissen ob, irgendetwas falsch ist.
Falls ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge habt, bitte ich euch sie mir mitzuteilen.

Viel Spaß beim lesen, d.





A DISCUSSION ABOUT MONEY

[Scene: Father is sitting on a chair at the living room he read a newspaper, his daughter comes to ask him…..]

Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”

Father: „WhatŽs up?”

Daughter: „Could you give me some money, please?”

Father: „What for do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”

Daughter: „ Enough? I will meet my friends in the city today, we want to go shopping”

Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?” And if you donŽt think that your pocket money is enough you should work one time and earn some money!

Daughter: „Oh dad... you donŽt have a clue about my life! We have weekend and everybody get money, instead of me!”

Father: „Yes. They maybe donŽt behave like you. If you would help your mother with the housework and learn for school, I would maybe give you more money!"

Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
But you canŽt see that, because you are never at home!

Father: „Oh really? And what about your last french test?”

Daughter: „Dad itŽs enough trust me! I got a good mark in biology this week”

Father: „Great, IŽm proud of you!”

Daughter: „Thanks daddy, do I get some money from you now?

Father: „How much?”

Daughter: „20£!”

Father: „What? Are you crazy? You get 15£ in a month, thatŽs more than enough. ”

Daughter: „Oh, dad!”

Father: „20£? thatŽs too much!”

Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I will do my homework tomorrow!”

Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”

Daughter: „ You know, IŽm saving my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”

Father: „ I can’t give you money, before I have talked with your mum about it.”

Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes home in the evening.”

Father: „WhatŽs your problem?”

Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”

Father: „IŽm sorry, I canŽt change it.”

Daughter: „My friends will come in 1 hour to pick me up!”

Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”

Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”

Father: „What did you say?”

Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!”