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NEW YORK
Yesterday, the police caught the most wanted person in the United States of America behind Osama Bin Laden.
The woman called “Bloddy Mary”. It is a big success because that woman killed six men. It is unbelievable but she does not regret any of these murders. She only wants the money of these victims. But why did nobody caught her before? That is simple. This black widow had a lot of identities.Some of her names were Catherine Jackson, Kate Summer or in the moment Mary Donald. A countless number of men were victims of her and so a lot of men lived in fear because they did not know if her wife was the wanted black widow.But yesterday the police noticed her after the death of her last husband Ronald Mc Donald. A second investigation showed that Ronald Mc Donald died of a poisoned soup.Now the terrible secrets of the “Bloody Mary” came to light: Mary Donald had a lot of husbands before and her real name is Caroline Kain. All of her husbands died on a mysterious way. Her first victim was Charles G.. He died of a car bomb in front of a Drive-in-restaurant. Martin G., her second victim, died of a shooting in a naked bar, Tom C., the third victim, was robbed and killed with a knife, Rick M., the fourth victim, died of an electric shock in his bathtube and her fifth victim Michael P. was a prisoner and died of a mysterious explosion in his cell. All these cases seemed to be accidents and a bit of bad luck but after such a murder Mary changed her identity and looked for a new rich husband. But yesterday the police could catch her and now she will be in prison for 172 years. There is no more danger because now she cannot uses her weapons of a woman anymore.