englisch, bitte einmal durchlesen, fehler? thx

hallo ich habe das für meine autasuchpartnerin geschrieben könntet ihr mir sagen ob das stimmt? wäre lieb, danke

Travelling is one of my favourite things to do because you can meet really great people and visit interesting places.

My favourite music is pop/rock, mostly I listen to current charts and songs of well- known singers, who come from around the world, or german ones, I think there are a few really good groups here.
The village where I live, that means the village you will be when you will visit me, is called like the street, Ehningsen, it belongs to the bigger city Welver, but Ehningsen itself has just about 100 inhabitants and the distance to Soest, to my school, is about 11 kilometres.
Big cities, which you can find on a map to know approximatly where we are, are Dortmund, Cologne, Düsseldorf.

I would like to have a girl as an exchange partner, because she will share a room with me.
I am allergic to cats but it does not matter too much because I can take tablets.

I look forward to hear from you,