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The school was all but impossible for Sparky. His classmates and Sparky thought he was a loser, because Sparky has failed every subject in the eight grade. Furthermore Sparky never once asked a girl from high school if they want to go out, because he was too afraid of being rejected. Sparky had made his mind up early in life that if things were meant to work out, the would.

Drawing was very important for him and he was very proud of his artwork. Sparky was determined to be a professional artist and he wrote a letter to Walt Disney Stu-dios. But unfortunately he had been rejected, it was another loss for the loser. And so Sparky decided to write his own autobiography in cartoons. The cartoon character would soon famous. The boy, who was a loser, created the “peanuts” comic strip.

bitte durchlesen und schaun ob ihr fehler findet (:
Frage von Chantal16 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 04.05.2010 - 09:18

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.05.2010 - 11:42
School was all but(1) impossible for Sparky. His classmates and Sparkythought he was a loser, because

he had failed every subject in theeight grade. Furthermore Sparky never once asked a girl from high school if
she wanted to go out with him , because he was too afraid of being rejected. Sparky had made up his mind early in his life that if things were meant to work out wrong, they would.
Drawing was very important for him and he was very proud of his artwork. Sparky was determined to become a professional artist and he wrote a letter of application to the Walt Disney Studios. But unfortunately he was rejected, it was another loss for the loser. And so Sparky decided to write his own autobiography in cartoons. The cartoon character would soon become famous. The boy, who was a loser, created the “peanuts” comic strip.

1) all but heißt = alles "andere als", und das meinst doch wohl nicht.

Korrektur: fett = korrigiert bzw eingefügt;
schräg = gestrichen

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Antwort von Chantal16 (ehem. Mitglied) | 04.05.2010 - 17:47
okay dann gehört all but weg (:

dankeschön fürs ausbessern..

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