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Muss für morgen in Englisch einen kleinen talk vorbereiten... hab da schon was geschrieben... da grammatik und rechtschreibung in englisch jedoch nicht meine stärke ist, wollte ich euch fragen, ob ihr mein "meisterwerk" vielleicht kontrollieren könnt.


also hier ist das meisterwerk:

FC CHELSEA

My talk is about FC Chelsea London. Chelsea is an english soccer team and is also known as „the Blues“ because of its blue dressed players.
FC Chelsea was found in the year 1905 by the Mears-brothers. The Blues are habitat on the Stamford Bridge, the stadium where their home games are discharge.
In 2003 a historical happening influenced the whole footballworld. Roman Abramovitch, russian oil multimillionaire, buyed up 100% of the club. Since 2003 he invested 400 Mio Pounds in the team!
The team coach is the portuguese Jose Morinho who won the UEFA Cup and the Champions League with the FC Porto. Teamcapitan is John Terry who is defender. Other important players are Frank Lampard, Mikael Essien and Arjen Robben whom play midfield. Also Didier Drogba, offender, is very important for the team.

Greatest successes were the Community Shield, FA Cup and League Cup.

Since 2003 Chelsea got his own Pay TV Channel who is called „Chelsea TV“.


Last season Chelsea won the Community Shield and the League Cup. In the Champions League the Blues reached the Semi-final where they lost against Liverpool, later Champions League winner!
On the way to the semi-final they overmaster among other Teams the FC Bayern Munich and the FC Barcelona.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 21.02.2006 - 18:02

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:07
Auf die Grammatik und die Rechtschreibung habe ich jetzt nicht so geachtet,
aber Chelsea ist auf jeden Fall super!

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:12
ja weiß ich selber, das dass n gutes thema is...


aba die grammatik is sicher nich ganz astrein! also bitte! helft mir! is voll wichtig... stehe in englisch auf 4-....

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:15
Wie bitte?echt? sieht aber dafür ganz gut aus! naja zeitformen sind in 2-3sätzen falsch warte..

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:15
My talk is about FC Chelsea London. Chelsea is an english soccer team and IT is also known as „the Blues“ because of its blue dressed players.
FC Chelsea was foundED in 1905 by the Mears-brothers. The Blues are habitat on the Stamford Bridge, the stadium where their home games are discharge (was willst du mit diesem Satz sagen?).
In 2003 a historical happening influenced the whole footballworld. Roman Abramovitch, A russian oil multimillionaire, buyed up TO 100% of the club. Since 2003 he invested 400 Mio Pounds in the team!
The team coach is the portuguese Jose Morinho who won the UEFA Cup and the Champions League with (vielleicht lieber BY) the FC Porto. Teamcapitan is John Terry AS defender. Other important players are Frank Lampard, Mikael Essien and Arjen Robben WHO play midfield. Also Didier Drogba, the offender (wenns mehrere davon gibt dann AN offender), is very important for the team.

Greatest successes were the Community Shield, FA Cup and League Cup.

Since 2003 Chelsea got his own Pay TV Channel who is called „Chelsea TV“.


Last season Chelsea won the Community Shield and the League Cup. In the Champions League the Blues reached the Semi-final where they lost against Liverpool, later Champions League winner!
On the way to the semi-final they overmaster (das wort gibts gar nicht, glaub ich ^^) among other Teams the FC Bayern Munich and the FC Barcelona

was willst du mit dem letzten Satz sagen!?


Also.. bis auf die paar Sachen find ichs okay.

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:15
muss du es vortragen?

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:16
The text is good also the gramma but chelsea , is not my favourite team . i am a britan and i am a gunners fan . wenn fussball dann Arsenal ..... Aber american football is geiler

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:18
^^ ja ein kumpel von mir hat letzte woche über arsenal nen talk gehalten...


ja also ich muss das vortragen... darf natürlich nich ablesen, aba so in etwas wird das dann wohl aussehn also vielen dank an euch!

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:19
@ african soul:

mit dem letzten satz will ich sagen:

auf dem weg ins halbfinale haben sie unter anderem den FC bayern und den FC barcelona geschlagen^^

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:20
vielleicht solltest du noch sagen das fc chelsea london ind london spielt.
mir sind nämlich schon leute begegnet die sowas nicht aus dem namen erkannt haben. Und zwar habe ich mal Hertha BSC Berlin erwähnt, worauf die Frage kam, wo denn Hertha liegt^^

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:21
FC CHELSEA

My talk is about FC Chelsea London. Chelsea is an english soccer team and is also known as „the Blues“ because of its blue dressed players.
FC Chelsea was founded in the year 1905 by the Mears-brothers. The Blues are habitat on the Stamford Bridge, the stadium where their home games are discharge.
In 2003 a historical happening has influenced the whole footballworld. Roman Abramovitch, a russian oil multimillionaire, buyed up 100% of the club. Since 2003(oder from 2003 on) he has invested 400 Mio Pounds in the team!
The team coach is the portuguese Jose Morinho who won the UEFA Cup and the Champions League with the FC Porto. the Teamcapitan is John Terry who is defender. Other important players are Frank Lampard, Mikael Essien and Arjen Robben whom play midfield. Also Didier Drogba, offender, is very important for the team.

Greatest successes were the Community Shield, FA Cup and League Cup.

Since 2003 Chelsea has got his own Pay TV Channel which is called „Chelsea TV“.


Last season Chelsea has won the Community Shield and the League Cup. In the Champions League the Blues reached the Semi-final where they lost against Liverpool, later Champions League winner!
On the way to the semi-finals they overmaster(was soll das heißen) among other Teams -the FC Bayern Munich and the FC Barcelona.

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:22
wäre sicher auch interessant zu erwähnen, dass arsenal und chelsea sich überhaupt nich mögen, also rivalen sind^^

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:23
Dann würd ich schreiben:

On their way to the semi-final they also won against teams like the FC-Bayern München and FC Barcelona

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:23
gar keine schlechte idee zecco...-_-

vielleicht sollt ich noch erwähnen, dass chelsea mit tottenham, arsenal und fulham verfeindet ist....

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:24
Zitat:
FC Chelsea was found in the year 1905 by the Mears-brothers.

Ich glaub das heißt "was founded" --> aber nich ganz sicher
Zitat:
Roman Abramovitch, russian oil multimillionaire, buyed up 100% of the club.

ich würd vor "russion oil multimillionaire" noch "a" setzen und das heißt "bought" nicht "byed" !
Zitat:
Also Didier Drogba, offender, is very important for the team.

den Satz würd ich irgendwie anders schreiben
Zitat:
In the Champions League the Blues reached the Semi-final where they lost against Liverpool, later Champions League winner!

...mlater they were (the)Champions League winner!
Zitat:
On the way to the semi-final they overmaster among other Teams the FC Bayern Munich and the FC Barcelona.

für "they" entweder "their" oder "the"..kommt drauf an was du genau damit meinst...

lg

 
 Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2006 - 18:24
ja aber arsenal is besser^^...
wie gesagt, manche leute finden sowas halt nich als selbstverständlich

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