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Einladung zu Thanksgiving: Bitte um Korrektur

Frage: Einladung zu Thanksgiving: Bitte um Korrektur
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Könnte das eventuell jemand Korrekturlesen? Was muss ich zukünftig beachten? Wo sind noch Baustellen?

Hey Maja,
I hope you are well.
Yesterday Andreas and I talk about thanksgiving and we had an idea. We want to invite you, Tom and the kids to stay thanksgiving with us. We haven´t seen us for two month. Too long for my oppinion 😊 .
I have so much to tell you. Our Kids could play together and Tom and Andreas they will talk the whole day about there oldtimers. You know what I mean 😊 . Andreas is very excited to show Tom his new „baby“.

I want to make a turkey maybe you can help me with the preparations and make a salad?

I am looking forward to your answer
Greetings Mia
Frage von miela | am 16.02.2020 - 15:17


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 16.02.2020 - 22:34
  • Hey Maja, I hope you are doing well/are fine/you’re all right.
  • undefined Yesterday Andreas and I talked about Thanksgiving Day (Feiertage groß schreiben!) and we had an idea.
  • We would like to invite you, Tom and the kids to stay with us on Thanksgiving Day.
  • We haven`t seen each other for two months.
  • Too long in my opinion.
  • I have so much to tell you.
  • Our kids could play together and Tom and Andreas will talk the whole day about there oldtimers.
  • You know what I mean .
  • Andreas is very excited to show Tom his new „baby“ .
  • I want to cook a turkey maybe you can help me with the preparations and make a salad?
  • I am looking forward to your answer

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