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Hornby, Nick - About a boy: Charakterisierung Marcus

Frage: Hornby, Nick - About a boy: Charakterisierung Marcus
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Ich brauche dringend eine Korrektur für mein Text :)

Marcus is a twelve-year-old boy whose parents are separated and so he left Cambridge where they had all been living and moved to London alone with his mother because his mother found a Job.
But that doesn’t mean that he doesn’t see his dad, he visits him at the weekends and likes his girlfriend Lindsey too. He is worried about two things in life since they arrive in London, firstly he feels uncomfortable at his new school because he gets bullied by the kids. Some reasons that make him different is, for example, he is weird, old-fashioned, has a strange haircut, wears also weird glasses and he listens to unpopular singers like John Mitchell and likes singing too. Also, he doesn’t watch tv or play any computer games because Fiona, his mother, doesn’t allow him. All the kids laugh at him, especially when he suddenly sings during the lesson when he gets nervous. That’s the reason why he doesn’t have any friends and nobody to talk to. Whenever he tries to talk to Nicky and mark, two of his only friends at his new school get away from him because they are afraid to get bullied too. His second concern is his mum, who is always crying more than in Cambridge, so he wants someone who makes her happy because he also doesn’t know the reason and tries to know it and suffers from depression. Marcus is described as a shy, polite, naive and unconfident boy. For example, he says that he isn’t the right person for parties because he is shy.

Danke im Voraus!
Frage von Ichkannnixx | am 09.02.2019 - 14:25


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Antwort von cleosulz | 10.02.2019 - 10:22
Warum sollen wir einen Text korrigieren, den du mit einem Online-Übersetzer erstellst hast?

Wo ist deine Eigenleistung?

Das machte übrigen DEEPL.com aus deinem deutschen Text:

Marcus is a 12-year-old boy whose parents are separated.
So he left Cambridge, where they had all lived, and moved to London alone with his mother because his mother had found a job.
But that doesn`t mean he doesn`t see his father, he visits him on weekends and also likes his girlfriend Lindsey. Since his arrival in London he has been worried about two things in life. First, he feels uncomfortable in his new school because he is bullied by the children. Some reasons that make him different are for example he is funny, old-fashioned, has a strange haircut, wears funny glasses and listens to unloved singers like John Mitchell and likes to sing. He also doesn`t watch TV and doesn`t play computer games because Fiona, his mother, doesn`t allow him to. All children laugh at him, especially when he suddenly sings in class when he gets nervous. That`s why he has no friends and no one to talk to. Whenever he tries to talk and mark with Nicky, two of his only friends escape his new school because they are afraid of being bullied. His second concern is his mother, who always cries more than at Cambridge. That`s why he wants someone who makes her happy, because he doesn`t know the reason and tries to know him and suffers from depression. Marcus is described as a shy, polite, naive and unconscious boy. He says, for example, that he is not the right person for parties because he is shy.

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