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kontrolle über meinen englisch text 😬 Hi Jack,
I am glad that you wrote me! I’m feeling good what about you?
Anyway I am really happy for you that you found a job that you like.
But I am not happy about you having less time for me or your other friends, but I can completly understand that you need that job to be a little more independently. I hope your other friends understand it too.
I would recommend you to speak with your manager about the hours you need to work, ask him it it is possible to reduce the number of working hours. Tell him that you need more free time and that you don’t want to neglect school because of the job. I am sure that he will understand this, if not i would search for a new job with less hours to work and more free time.
I hope i could help you, and I hope I will see you soon!

Best regards,