Englisch Short Presentation: Bitte korrigieren

Hey hab morgen eine Präsentation die zwei minuten dauern sollte, wäre dankbar wenn sie mir das korrigieren würden


Hello everbody (Mrs.Hofer, Classmates)

Welcome to my presentation about My Cats

My cat Pinos is four years old.
He has red brown skin (Fell) and blue eyes.
He loves to eat food like chicken or beef also he is very lazy and hyperactive too.
Did you known that the most popular pet in the UK and in the US is the cat ?
A cat can be twelve years old and belongs to the wildcats.
Especially the cat is very popular for their good eyes and ears
In the past the cat was revered throughout Egypt and was considered sacred.
I have also a another cat: Mimi she is very old but fit. I think she is eleven years
old and the opposite of Pinos.

That was my presentation about my cats
i hope you enjoyed
Have you any questions ?