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Englisch Short Presentation: Bitte korrigieren

Frage: Englisch Short Presentation: Bitte korrigieren
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Hey hab morgen eine Präsentation die zwei minuten dauern sollte, wäre dankbar wenn sie mir das korrigieren würden


Hello everbody (Mrs.Hofer, Classmates)

Welcome to my presentation about My Cats

My cat Pinos is four years old.
He has red brown skin (Fell) and blue eyes.
He loves to eat food like chicken or beef also he is very lazy and hyperactive too.
Did you known that the most popular pet in the UK and in the US is the cat ?
A cat can be twelve years old and belongs to the wildcats.
Especially the cat is very popular for their good eyes and ears
In the past the cat was revered throughout Egypt and was considered sacred.
I have also a another cat: Mimi she is very old but fit. I think she is eleven years
old and the opposite of Pinos.

That was my presentation about my cats
i hope you enjoyed
Have you any questions ?
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 07.11.2018 - 18:35


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 07.11.2018 - 20:51
Hello everbody (Mrs.Hofer, Classmates)

Welcome to my presentation about my Cats

  • My cat Pinos is four years old.
  • He has red brown fur (ausgesprochen: för) and blue eyes.
  • He loves to eat food like chicken or beef and he is both very lazy and hyperactive too.
    echt? faul und hyperaktiv? selten bei Katzen
  • Did you know that the cat is the most popular pet in the UK and in the US?
    Reihenfolge im Satz leicht geändert
  • A cat can live up to 12 years and belongs to the wildcats.
    (stimmt nicht ganz 12-15 Jahre in der Regel)
  • Especially the cat is very popular for its good eyes and ears
    (the cat - its eyes; the cats - their eyes)
  • In the past the cat was revered throughout Egypt and was considered sacred. ✓
  • I have also a another cat: Mimi she is very old but fit. I think she is eleven years
  • old and the opposite of Pinos.
    Du solltest Dich vielleicht für je eine der oben genannten Eigenschaft entscheiden; wer ist faul und wer hyperaktiv
  • That was my presentation about my cats
  • I hope you enjoyed it
  • Have you any questions ?
    oder Do you have any questions?

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