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Hallo! Ist der One Minute Talk so in Ordnung?
Habt ihr Tipps zum Vortagen? Realschule Klasse 10.

Well my name is Sophie, i am 15 years old and after school i want to make my Abitur.
It’s comparable with the High School. After that i want to study real estate industry. When i have finished my study, i want to to start my education as a real estate broker.
Well today i want to speak about my favourite hobby. I love it to go riding.
My horse is called Peggy. Peggy is a white horse with small grey spots. Her mane and her tail are also grey and she has blue eyes. Peggy is not my own horse. In german we say for it ’’Reitbeteiligung’’ but i think the world does not exist in english. So i try to explain it. I share the horse with the owner and another girl. Actually i would prefer to have my own horse, but i think that would be too much responsibility and right now, if i still have school.. , too much time.
I can say that Peggy is like my own horse.
I can participate with her on equestrian competitions, i can drive with her in riding holidays,
i can ride everywhere with her.. wether it’s in the summer to a lake or across a field or in the winter in the forest and that’s the reason why i can say that Peggy and I have an intimate friendship, even if it sounds stupid.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 23.01.2016 - 17:32


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 23.01.2016 - 18:11
öfter man einen anderen Ausdruck für I want to verwenden, kurze Sätze versuchen zu verbinden!

Well my name is Sophie, I am 15 years old and after school I want to do my A-levels, which is comparable with the High School.
Afterwards my plans are to study real estate industry. After having finished my studies, I would like to start my education as a real estate broker.
Well today I let me talk about my favourite hobby. I love it to go riding.
My horse is called Peggy and she is a white horse with small grey spots. Her mane and her tail are also grey and she has blue eyes. Peggy doesn`t belong to me, in German we call it horse sharing (’’Reitbeteiligung’’), which means, that I share the horse with the owner and another girl. Actually I would prefer to have my own horse, but since I still go to school right now, I think that would be too much responsibility and requires a lot of time.
I could say that Peggy is like my own horse.
I may participate with her on equestrian competitions, drive with her in riding holidays and
ride with her
everywhere .. wether it’s in the summer to a lake or across a field or in the winter in the forest and that’s the reason why I can say that Peggy and I have an intimate friendship, even if it sounds stupid.


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Antwort von pink111 | 23.01.2016 - 18:11
Oh mein Gott, vielen lieben dank! :)))))


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 23.01.2016 - 18:15
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Oh mein Gott, vielen lieben dank! :)))))

Es war ja nicht sooo schlecht, aber es geht eben doch noch "eleganter" Und "Reitbeteiligung gibt es doch in Englisch => http://www.dict.cc/?s=Reitbeteiligung. Übrigens ein gutes Wörterbuch!


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Antwort von pink111 | 23.01.2016 - 18:16
dankeschön, vielen lieben dank :))))

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