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Frage: Speech-Flüchtlinge Leider nur noch Heute Zeit:(
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Hi wir müssen in der Schule eine Rede über Flüchtlinge halten und wollte fragen, ob kurz jemand rüber schauen könnte. Würde mich wirklich sehr freuen. LG


PS: ich muss dagegen sein, dass Flüchtlinge nach Deutschland kommen.

Mein Text:
Speech-Refugees:”Welcome to Germany!”

Kosovo, Syria, Albania, Iraq, Serbia and Afghanistan- 900.000 refugees leave their countries with the same destination : Germany! And we say “Hello, welcome to Germany”!
I want you to see your future right now. What does it look like? Are you happy with the situation of the world? No? Let´s change that. We could do it. Since we are the adults from tomorrow, we have the assignment to keep the world rolling. And the sooner the better.

A few days ago we close the old Year and bring in the New Year. But let`s look back. What big word comes in your mind when you think of 2015. Its a word which kind of split-ted Germany and especially the politic is affected.
Refugees.
This topic was the main one in 2015 and today I want to talk about it. Since it is a topic with no end in sight.
The refugee crisis involves many problems in several aspects. And the reasons for this problems are the huge number of refugees how travel to Germany. Traveling is one of the many problems we have. More than 2000 refugees were drowned on the trip. And when they reach Germany after their escape out of panic, shock, fear, danger and hunger they have not managed it. Here we can not help them since they are to many. And the more refugees reach Germany the more problems we have. Refugees costs a lot of money food, hygiene and especially housing I think I don’t have to tell you that safe, affordable housing is expensive. And this is the most important point without any solutions. Only some politician try to handle the situation one example from Dieter Janecek is that private persons, so anyone of us should admit an refugee and as consideration one get some money, but do you really want someone you don`t know living in your house?
Maybe we have to look at the concurrent causes to find a better solution for the refugees and for us.
The reason why so many people mostly young men try to leave their country is a cicil war. But every war has an end. What happens then? Who rebuild the country after the war when the strong young men are here and not there ? Or what happens here when the family men try to get their families to join them. Since here they have a home,food and nearly everything what they want, for free. Generally I think we should think about our sozial help but this is an other topic. When the families join their men, the number of refugees tribled and the problems accumulating (ansammeln). When the children and women join their man, there is a lack of education since the refugees can not speak German and we have to less teachers and people how can teach them in our language. Because of this many problems we have here now and we would have get when more refugees reach Germany, we should help them in their country to fight against the causes why they leave their countries. And as well we should talk with other countries since we are in this moment the country who/which? Has the most number of refugees. Alone we can not manage the problems, refugees have and the one they bring in our country. But I really think that we have to help, but take them all up in one country, our country is the wrong way. So should say instead of “Refugees - Welcome to Germany” , “Refugees we want to help you but please in the near of you, that you can rebuild your country after the war..”
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 05.01.2016 - 16:13

 
Antwort von ANONYM | 05.01.2016 - 19:24
Das klingt für mich nach eine sehr zweifelhaften Aufgabe und dir ist sicherlich bewusst, dass die Argumentation im Text sachlich nicht korrekt ist. Du solltest dir überlegen, ob du damit in der Schule keinen Ärger bekommst.


Aber hier deine Korrektur:

Speech-Refugees:”Welcome to Germany!”

Kosovo, Syria, Albania, Iraq, Serbia and Afghanistan- 900.000 refugees left their home countries with the same destination : Germany! And we say “Hello, welcome to Germany”!
I want you to see your future right now. What does it look like? Are you happy with the situation of the world? No? Let´s change that. We could do it. Since we are the adults of tomorrow, we have the duty to keep the world rolling. And the sooner we start the better.

A few days ago we closed the old year and started the new year. But let`s look back. What big word comes in your mind when you think of 2015. There is a word which kind of splitted Germany and especially the policy was affected: Refugees.
This topic was the main one in 2015 and today I want to talk about it. Since it is a topic with no end in sight.
The refugee crisis involves many problems in several aspects. And the reasons for this problems are the huge number of refugees that now travel to Germany. Traveling is one of the many problems we have. More than 2000 refugees were drowned on the trip. And when they reach Germany after their escape out of panic, shock, fear, danger and hunger they have not managed it. Here we can not help them since they are too many. And the more refugees reach Germany the more problems we have. Refugees costs a lot of money for food, hygiene and especially housing. I think I don’t have to tell you that safe, affordable housing is expensive. And this is the most important point without any solutions. Only some politicians try to handle the situation. One example is Dieter Janecek who suggests that private persons, should house an refugee and as compensation get some money, but do you really want someone you don`t know living in your house?
Maybe we have to look at the concurrent causes to find a better solution for the refugees and for us.
The reason why so many people mostly young men try to leave their country is a civil war. But every war has an end. What happens then? Who rebuild the country after the war when the strong young men are here and not there ? Or what happens here when the family men try to get their families to join them. Since here they have a home,food and nearly everything what they want, for free. Generally I think we should think about our social help but this is an other topic. When the families join their men, the number of refugees would be tribled and the problems would accumulate. When the children and women join their men, there is a lack of education since the refugees can not speak German and we have to little teachers and people who can teach them in our language. Because of these many problems we have here now and as we would have get when more refugees reach Germany, we should help them in their country to fight against the causes why they left their home countries. And as well we should talk with other countries since we are in this moment the country which has the highest number of refugees. Alone we cannot manage the problems refugees have and the ones they bring to our country. But I really think that we have to help, but take them all up in one country, our country, is the wrong way. So we should say instead of “Refugees - Welcome to Germany” , “Refugees we want to help you but please in the near of you (?), that you can rebuild your country after the war..”

 
Antwort von ANONYM | 05.01.2016 - 19:42
Hi ja leider mussten wir so argumentieren das jeder uns später zustimmt und auch das Thema dürften wir uns nicht wirklich selber aussuchen :( Das ist natürlich nicht meine richtige Meinung..


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 05.01.2016 - 20:37
Hier meine Korrektur, wobei ich ein wenig zusammengefasst aber den Tenor beibehalten habe:
Kosovo, Syria, Albania, Iraq, Serbia and Afghanistan - 900.000 refugees leave their home with the same destination: Germany! And we say “Hello, welcome to Germany”!

What does your future look like right now? Are you happy with the situation of the world? No? Let’s change it. We can do it. Since we are tomorrow’s adults, we have to keep the world rolling. And, the sooner we do, the better.

A few days ago we said goodbye to the old Year and welcomed the New Year. But let’s look back. Which term comes to your mind thinking of 2015? A word which somehow divides / divided Germany and affects / affected especially the politic: Refugees.

The refugee crisis involves many problems in several aspects, especially the huge number of refugees travelling to Germany. Refugees cost a lot of money, food, hygiene and especially housing. I think I don’t have to tell you, that safe, affordable housing is expensive. And this is the most important point without visible solution.

Some politicians, such as Dieter Janecek, try to handle the situation by calling for gratifications for those who admit a refugee, but do you really want someone living in your house whom you don’t know?

If refugees try to get their relatives to Germany the number of refugees multiplies and the problems will accumulate, such as financial, economic and social problems.


You know that the refugees can`t speak German and we don’t have enough teachers to teach them in their language.


Because of these predictable problems we have and will have in future, we should help them in their countries to fight against the causes and find a better solution, so they needn’t to escape.


I really think that we have to help, but hosting them all in our country, is the wrong way. Instead of saying “Refugees - Welcome to Germany”, we should say “Refugees, we want to help you, but at your home, so that you can rebuild your country after the war.”

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