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A few days ago I read an act , which I considered an important issue.
For that reason I reflected about this item and I would like to present to you my thoughts to you. I am going to discuss the ways of how to teach a stundent. If it is mandatory that all people must go to school, the legitimate question is:Should you go to home-schooling or not?
On the one hand you often hear people say that it is a good idea to go to home-schooling.
First let menumerate some reasons, why it may be useful for students.
One argument for is that your teacher would focus only on you. The advantage of this is that  the teachter can better judge,how you really perform. For example, if you are in a normal school and you would like to say something, some people could laugh about you, if you say something wrong.
Second, you get intensive and flexible teaching. The advantage of this is, when you are in a normal class, there are some people, who disturb the lessons. So teacher must repeat the lesson or to speack about the problems with these students. So the home-schooling is useful, because something like this cannot happen.
Onother argument for is that the parents could be allowed to tell the teachers, what the people mustn´t learn. For example, the parents don´t want their children to learn about the sexual education….
On the other hand people think that the home- schooling is a bad way to teach someone.There a several reasons for this.
First, when you go to a normal school,_you would have more experience . In a normal school you learn, how to behave or to hear various opinions from the classmates.Something like this you don´t learn at home-schooling.
Second, if your parents are your teachers, they don´t have any experience on how to teach children.The real teachers have learned how to teach.
Anther significant point is that the home-schooling is sometimes boring. The reason for this is you sitt there alone and you don´t have a friend to speak to.
Weighing the pros and cons,I come to the conclusion that the cons are more impressiv than the pros.So all in all I believe that the home-schooling is bad way to teach someonce becaus you don´t collect experience on how to be a proper student. This decision is as far as I can see the right.
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