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A few days ago I read a report, which Iconsidered an important issue.
For that reason I reflected about thisitem and I would like to present you my thoughts. I am going todiscuss, if students hould be allowed to use their mobiles at school.If it is supposed in geral that most students have a mobile, thelegitimate question is: Are they permitted to use their mobiles atschool?
On the one hand you often hear peoplesay that it is a good idea to use the phone at school.
First, you can use the phone inemergency situations. For example, your parents happens an accident,while you are at school. So your parents could talk to you and theywould inform you.Another example is,when you have missedthe bus. For that reason, you could talk to your parents to informthem.
Second, the phone is useful in lessons.The reason for this is, when you need a vocable, you can watch is bythe phone. The phone is in this situation more flexible than adicitionary.
Another argument for is that thephone could help you in situations, who you are nervous.For example,you have in one day eightclass hours.So you need a little break to relax.
On the other hand people think that thephone should be not allowed to use it at school. There areseveral/various reasons for this.
First, ot could be give a problem withthe communication. In the breaks would the students always play withethe phone. That is why they wouldn´t chat or do something, when theschool is over.
Another significant point is that a lotof people would be cheat in exams and so he doesn´t take pains. Incontrast with someone, who learned the whole day. That would be veryunfair.
Finall, the students could take photosby someone, who does´t want it. For example, the student could takea photo by a teacher and he puts it in the internet.
Weighing the pros and cons ,I come tothe conclusion that the cons are more impressiv than the pros.So all in all I believe that the phonesshould be not allowed at school. This dicision is as far as I can seethe right.