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There was a discussion about what is probably important for workers in a franchise.
I have read an article about US worker, I was surprised that the appreciation of good work done, feeling in the know of things going on and sympathic understanding of personal problems are most important for the workers. For me the good working conditions, good wages and the personal loyalty is most important. Because if the working conditions are very bad, how will you work there and what will you do with your money if you are not healthy. So that´s why I think this threee things are important.
Altought I can understand why it is imprtant for teenagers in the US, the costumers are like kings and queens for the worker. So they have to be friendly all the time. If they have not a friendly team with whom they can work well all the time, than they can not be nice to the costumers. So the Americans have another attitude, that´s why they think in a different way. We have to diffrence the hopes of the workers in the US and in Germany.