film..gut oder schlecht

hi könntet ihr meinen englisch text verbessern also wir müssen einen review über : ,,whale rider`` schreiben,er sollte nicht zu lang sein

review : the film whale rider is about a girlher name sit paikea,as she was born her twin brother and her mother died.her father went to germany and her grandpa koro was very unhappy because he wanted that a boy will be the new chief of the maoris.for paikea it was very hard,and koro had open a school for boys where they had to learn to be the new chief.But nobody had get it .Paikea trys to show him that she would be the perfect chief but he dont want to see it.at the end paikea dont give up and believes in her self and she rides on a while and everybody knows that she is the necx chief and also the while rider.
For me at the time i hadnt unterstood what was going on and it hadnt any action or breath taking moments and it get bored.but after a while i knew that the film tells us to not to give up and always believes in your self and to love and to stand by your famile even if they arent nice to you.And the best szene was were the girl had defeated the boy but the grandpa wanst happy .the soundtrack of the film are indian musik and whale sound but it hadnt any speacial effects.and the actors also played there rolls good.the movie is for people who are very emotional an believesi n magic and like sad storys.so all in all the film was boring at the beginning but then is get a liitle bit better but its also sad.


bitte verbessern (halt auch welche sachen auslassen,umschreiben ,wäre nett :) )