Referat über meine Familie

Hi alle zusammen, es geht darum, ich muss morgen ein Englisch Referat halten und wollte euch fragen über ihr doch bitte so nett sein könntet und einmal drüber schauen könnte :)

Also hier der englische Text, also es ist ein Referat über mich und meine Familie, es ist noch nicht ganz fertig, ich will im unteren Teil noch rein schreiben, wo wir bereits gewohnt haben, aber an dieser Stelle hänge ich einfach gewaltig :/ Es währe auch super toll, wenn ihr vlt.
ein paar Wörter findet, die man durch "schlauere" also Sprachkenntnis bessere Wörter ersetzen könntet ;)

Vielen dank schon mal im voraus :)

Hello everybody,

I know that I have said that I want to talk about my future, but now I want to talk about my family.

If that’s a problem, then say it, please.

Okay, in the first part I want to describe my family members.

I have a mother, a little sister and two older brothers.

The name from my little sister is Maria and she is 10 years old. At the moment she attended the third class in the primary school in Markt Schwaben.

My first older brother is 17 years old and he goes in the 11 class at the FOS in Erding. He’s name is Hansi. He wants to work as a teacher for the FOS.

My second brother Maxi is 24 years old and he works as a Lorry driver in the company Gienger.
He lives in Gelting. Gelting is between Markt Schwaben and Poing.

The last family member is my Mother and she’s 43 years old and she was born in Furt Oberhaching. And she has an own cleaning company. The Company name is GSG.

Oh I’ve forgot to tell you any things about me.
So, I’m 15 years old and I attended the ninth class in the middle school in Poing.
And I want to work as a computer scientist.

So, that was the first part. In the second part I want to tell you where we have been accustomed.

Since then I was born we lived in Siggenhofen, than when I was four years old we moved to Herdweg. As I was six years old we lived in Habererweg in Markt Schwaben