Morgan,Edwin - Glasgow Sonnets: Analysis

Erstmal das Gedicht:


A mean wind wanders through the backcourt trash.
Hackles on puddles rise, old mattresses puff briefly and subside.
Play fortresses of bric-a-brac spill out some ash.
Four storeys have no windows left to smash,
but the fifth a chipped sill buttresses
mother and daughter the last mistresses
of that black block condemned to stand, not crash.
Around them the cracks deepen, the rats crawl.
The kettle whimpers on a crazy hob.
Roses of mould grow from ceiling to wall.
The man lies late since he has lost his job,
smokes on one elbow, letting his coughs fall
thinly into an air too poor to rob.

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Die Frage lautet wie die Atmosphere und halt die Umwelt in dem Gedicht beschrieben wird.

Allerdings fällt mir nicht allzuviel dazu ein.


Bislang habe ich:

cold, dark, depressing, dirty

Ja und mehr eigentlich nicht.

Kann mir irgendjemand weiterhelfen ?

Ich wäre sehr dankbar :-)

mfg. utz.