Korrektur

The text “Poverty Is Relative“ written by Mari Thekaekara deals with her experiences with different types of poverty.
Maria Thekaekara is one of the founders of ACCORD, an Indian organization working with the poor.
Until 1994 she has only worked in India and has got to know ... poverty in the Indian society. People live in huts without electricity,....women have to look for firewood and food all day, and they carry water in pots from wells half-a-kilometre away.
But then she and her husband havehad the chance of visiting “Easterhouse housing estate” in Glasgow, which is called the worst slum in Europe.
Before they have travelled, she hasn`t believe ..Glasgow ..to be poorer than India.
But when she isthere, she is shocked: People have no work, aredispirited, depressed and alcoholic.
So she must realize that there are two types of poverty: On the one hand ...material poverty and on the other hand ... social deprivations.

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