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b) The blind are often more cheerful than the famous because only money doesn´t make happy.

The injured are sometimes people who had a terrible accident and have still got nighmares of this.
The lonely have often the wish to have a good partner until the end.

On a tour of Europe

Today is the 23rd September and Robin and Khalid are on a trip around Europe. They both come from Britain and have a british citizen. They are travelling by train with an InterRail ticket and started their trip in London on the 5th of September. At first they have been at Khalid´s uncle in Brussel and he have took them sighseeing. Khalid wrote also a letter for his girlfriend Fiona on the 5th September to say that they have safe arrived. Before the 5th September on the 2nd September Nina has written a letter for Khalid. She wrote that it is ok that he and Robin stay some nights at the Duponts, the au pair family from Nina in Grenoble. After the visit at Khalid´s uncle they went to Amsterdam on the 6th September. Between the 6th -22th September they were also in Copenhagen, Norway and Stockholm. They have even collected Norwegian money. After that they have spent some time at the „Oktoberfest“ in Munic and have bought t-shirts in Berlin. They bought also a sweetheart at the 22th September at „Oktoberfest“.
They are going to go to a wedding in Foggia. The wedding self will be on the 25th September. From the 27th September to the 1st they are going to go to Rome.On the 1st they are going to Grenoble to meet Nina. And at leat between the 1st and 5th they are going to be in Paris. With the help from the Duponts it has to be nice. At the end they are going to turn back home.