Englisch: Beruf

Hey, könnt ihr euch die beiden Texte ( 1.Text was mir im späteren Beruf wichtig ist und 2. Was ich später einmal werden möchte)von mir drüber schauen, ob sie grammatikalisch richtig geschrieben sind?! Könnt mir auch gerene Verbesserungsvorschläge oder des weiteren geben..Danke im Voraus! :)


Importantfor my career in the future is that i earn enough of money to support my family. I also want to have a good relationship to my colleagues and the employers.
The job should be interesting and got a lot of activities, so it will enjoy myself, because with “fun” I can get a better result and I won’t be stressed. I also want a job where I never learn out. A very important point for me is, that I have, beside my job, a lot of time for my family. But to have all this things, the job has to be sure.

My dream job is to be work as customs official, because I am very interested in customs and it is a varied job. Than important and first of all I find exciting that a customs to control the accuracy the flown goods and to control the arrange border controls. In addition it is much exciting to explain along the trafficking activities in Germany, in that these to damage whole employment our economy and also company, who to act legal.