Rossant,Cecile-Underground New York:Kontrolle Inhaltsangabe?

Hallo,
ich habe (mal wieder) ein problem.

Wir sollten in der Schule die Lektüre "Underground New York" lesen (von Cornelsen). Dazu eine Inhaltsangabe schreiben und die Personen charakterisieren.
Ich habe die komplette Inhaltsangabe in der Vergangenheitsform geschrieben. Ist das richtig oder falsch?


Und: Hier der Text! Ich bin mir nicht so sicher in der Grammatik. Ich könnte einen gebrauchen, der sich dafür bereitstellt diesen zu korrigieren!


Text:

Chapter 1

Basti and Zoe arrived in New York. First they got lost each other.
But then they find Uncle Ben,Debbie and Rick at the airport. Zoe was very excited and can´t
speak english because this. Uncle Ben took them to his apartment. It was a big apartment,
a 16-story tower. And they live in the 14th floor. They have a balcony where you can see the
Statue of Liberty. Zoe thought this was a hotel, because it was so strange.
After the elevator took them up, they meet Aunt Marion, Rick and Debbie showed Basti and Zoe the
rooms where they can sleep. After that they had a walk where Rick and Debbie present
many sights. Rick and Basti talked about the 9/11 and Rick told him how it was.
He was in school and the teacher talked about dinosaurs. Suddenly Rick heard a big
´´bum´´ and looked out the window. The EMpire State Building was collapsed.
It was so horrible and very much people cryed.

Chapter 2
Zoe and Basti go to the ESB with Debbie and Rick, after Uncle Ben print out the tickets from
the internet and wonderd him why it cost 18 dollars per elevator ride. Everybody enjoy it on
the Empire State Building and had a great view. After a while they go was taken down by the
elevator and go back to home. Basti and Rick talked about the coming day and Ricks plans.
He want to go to a tunnel with 2 friends and want to paint graffiti pictures on the wall.
Basti thought it was a great excited idea and then they told it Debbie and Zoe. Both of them
want to come with.Rick was happy. but what is with Ben and Marion? They had planned to say they
go to Central park. After a while they´re at home. But then Debbie said she wouldn´t go with
them to the tunnel. Her idea was to say they will make a picknick in Central park and she
is taking the meals,when Ben or Marion will be wondering.

Chapter 3
Basti, Zoe and Rick went to the tunnel. Everbody was excited. Then they meet Moog and Raul, the
two friends from Rick. First they had to climb over the fence. Moog and Raul straight want to
go in, but Rick said it was better to wait for the next train. Moog and Raul accepted this.
After 1 minute the train came. Everybody looked on their watches and save the time. Every 40
come a train, so the next train will be here at 11.45, because it is 11.05. They go in.
Rick was amazed about the great graffitis on the walls. They looked at the pictures from other
painters and then found a free point, where were no graffitis. Raul, Rick and Moog lay down
their rucksacks and unpacked out the cans. They started painting and Zoe had taken photos of
some pictures of the walls. Zoe go far away until the darkness. Zoe saw that the next train
will be come soon. She saw a door in the tunnel and go in the room after the door. It was
dark, she couldn´t see anything until she had used her flashlight. Suddenly she saw an old man,
sitting after a metal table. She was really s.c.a.r.e.d. The man asked for her nameand where she
come from. She replyed that her name is Zoe and she come from germany,near from Frankfurt. [...]
Basti, Moog, Rick and Raul also saw the next train will be come soon. But where was Zoe?
Basti was very nervous and looked after Zoe in every corner. There was a door. Basti went in. Nothing.
There was another door. Basti went in again. Yes, there was Zoe. But there was an old crazy man too.
Moog and Raul came in too. Everybody talked to each other.After they go out, they knew that the name
from the man is Mr Kaminski , he was called Professor and every Grafitti painter knows him.
Basti, Zoe and Rick had to go to Central park, because they maked a date with Debbie there.
They met Debbie and told her what they have did.

Chapter 4
Zoe saw lots of interesting people, restaurants and other things. Basti explained there was the most
famous apartment building in New York, the Dakota. They went to Central Park after picking up Debbie.
After their trip all went home. But then Rick argued with Debbie. Debbie want to go to the beach and
Rick want to go to the tunnel again. Then Uncle Ben came out of a room. He asked Rick what´s this
all about. But Rick told him some other things. Zoe had an great idea: They go to the tunnel and
Zoe will make a photo shooting with Debbie. Debbie also thought it was great and Rick agreed to.
So they will do that. By the way they explained Debbie who Mr Kaminski was.
They already reached the beach promenade. It was very sunny and there was many people! Rick
started to rap a Flip Flop Rap. ´´Flip Flop, Flip Flop, they don´t stop...´´ Zoe had taken photos and
they enjoyed the day.

Chapter 5
Zoe talked with Debbie about the photos she did yesterday. And then Debbie and Zoe looked for
clothes to wear in the tunnel to take photos. Zoe thought they should be colorful and lightly.
They packed in a few clothes into the rucksack, made up and wanted to start their trip. And
so they went to the tunnel. It was very professional, as they do it every day. Looked on the
watches, checked the time and ran into the tunnel. Rick started finishing his painting on the wall,
Zoe and Debbie searched a good place to take photos and Basti wanted to go to Mr. Kaminski!
Basti went in Mr Kaminski´s office after knocked on the door and he wanted to show Basti something.
There were photos of an old building on the desk. After Basti saw them, Mr Kaminski started explaining
that it was the Pennsylvania station on the photo, New York 1910 to 1963. Also he told Basti the history
of his life. He came from a very big family with 8 members. He had 4 sisters and 2 and a half brothers.
They named Berta, Sam, Murray, Edit, Shari, Ruth and was the half. And if it was too much for him,
he sometimes escaped to the Penn Station. It was on another photo. He loved trains and as he was
17 he became a track man, he had to checked if the tracks are right and sure.
Basti talked a little bit more with him. By the way Zoe and Debbie took photos and was in a real problem
a few minutes ago. As they took photos, Debbie saw that the nect train will be come in 2 minutes.
They had to hurry up. Zoe ran into a corner, but Debbie couldn´t ran in her red sandals. They already
saw the train was coming. But fortunately Debbie managed it to ran into the corner too. The train passed
away and they looked after Debbies shoes. Debbie was a little bit sad as she saw his shoe and realized that
she couldn´t call this a ´´shoe´´ any more.

Chapter 6
Mr Kaminski talked something to Basti and after a while debbie came in. She introduce herself and said
hello to him. Also they took a picture of all with Zoes camera. Mr Kaminski told them many facts about his past,
where he lived, how it was and something other. Basti learned that Mr Kaminskis family sold hats and the hats
named Kaminski hats. Zoe looked at her watch and realized they had to go to Rick now. So they did
it. Oh, the next train came and everybody squeezed himself in the Corner. The train passed and they went in
a sunny hot day.