Argumentation - Kontrolle nötig.

Liebe E-hausaufgaben Mitglieder,

ich habe hier eine Argumentation auf die schnelle zusammengebastelt und sollte auch gleich ne Übung für die Englisch-Klaus sein.
Ich würde euch bitten mir Verbesserungsvorschläge zu geben oder die Rechtschreibfehler zu korrigieren.
Es wäre echt nett von euch.

Hier der Text:

There are always discussions about whether Anglicism’s continue to enter the German language or not.No doubt, there are a lot of people who use Anglicism’s. Some people like the Anglicism´s and some not. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages. I would like to present some advantages and disadvantages and I would like to give an own opinion.

I am of the opinion that Anglicism’s should continue to be used in the German language.
Many of the arguments I´ve found confirm again my point of view.
First of all your vocabulary can be expanding. If you use Anglicism’s you also learn new words at the same time spoke for others languages.
Next I think it is easier to learn other languages because you get to know many other words.
In addition young people become a ware of the importance of the language.
The finally positive aspect is that the technical terms in some language areas be understood worldwide.
Nevertheless, although the arguments I have mentioned are very promising, there are always discussions that the German language could disappear little by little.
I am unfortunately one can connect with this statement because this statement is not quite the truth.
How likely is it that a language disappears on account of anglizismen?
It is very unlikely.
So I see no argument against another, which cannot confirm my opinion.

In summary one can say that Anglicism the German and the English language very encouraging.
I am absolutely of the opinion that anglicisms are very promoting the languages.
Because of the arguments I am finally come to the shown result.
I hope I could give you a clear overview.