Englisch - General Offer

Hi ihr :)

Wir müssen als Hausaufgabe wir einmal ein General offer schreiben.
Da ich immer noch nicht so ganz sicher darin bin, würde ich euch bitten einen schnellen Blick drüber zu werfen und so grobe fehler zu verbessern, oder gar verbesserungsvorschläge zu liefern :)

Dear Mr Koll Egah

Thank you for your enquiry of 30 February about our polish for cars. As requested we are sending you the 5 tins of 500g, free of charge. Furthermore, we are sending them today.

The tests we made at petrol stations and in companies with big car fleets went entirely satisfactory. Also, the consumption in comparison to other products was lower. Our special introductory price of just 10000€ for 20 tons expires in 3 months, which is why you should order now. Anyway, a quantity discount of 25% for large orders can be granted on the list price.

We hope you`ll bepleased with our product and look forward receiving your order.

Your sincerely

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